Unwritten Soul


Universal Love (Ft Terence George Craddock) - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Melting the ice
Flood me wise
Stuck for smiles
Bathe me mist shine
Glorious defined

Open your arms
For love abounds around
This protection against
Lesson earth harms...

Even cold ice
Surrender to love warm
Burn all boundaries
Immerse confidence
With no concept worry
Welcoming birth of glory

Out of this key world
There's no single time
Without thinking in my mind
Of moments to be with you
There's no race slave bound
There's no border crowned
There's no status to down

Enjoy the time
This is the moment
For you for me for us
Hold our hands surround
Thousands of hearts pound
Embracing this moment
The glory of creation love
Jump over ice fears
Melting point to freedom

So come be with us
Come out of this hidden land
In each point of pierced world
Expand to share Love word
Free fly like birds

Each all seconds to come
The moment with all of you
There's no harm hugs for you
There's no bullet chasing you
To breathe with new rules
Without discrimination
No more children crying
Losing future wild sympathy
In Knife battlefield of lust
Fold a forgotten dark past

Endanger wisdom trust enemies
End exploitation war...
Enliven one love innocent creativity
Through Soul tinted spirit
New shape compassion life fits

Living free living easy
Our earthly Elysian fields
Love peace freedom abound
All come humanity surround

Selfishness expressed greedy
Drown in this flood of humanity
Poverty reversed by love property
Merge rise for all true liberty

A choice for love
Skin colors blend
To carry one culture
United in a new sea
Where all continents
Are one language love
Ideals birth a new love sea

United in a new sea of love
Celebrate no boundary regions
Feast for enjoyable love seasons
Differences enhance diverse beauty
Crystal clear culture chimes
Crystal clear chime vision

A moment of truth
A moment of love
A moment of harmony

This is government of real civilization
New golden age for new youth
Where each hand holds hands
Faith buries dark ages vain
Free to love and to be loved
The world need love revolution
My words are not tounge sensation
Toward perfection link the junction
For hearts sharing love, life license

United by a key of love
To blend all skin colors
All cultures to preserve

A moment of truth for life hope
Love people love for people life
A time to sleep in angelic smiles

God smiles
The universe shines
In radiance

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Love this collaboration! This is the earliest one, more to come :)
Love across boundaries will definitely build the greatest civilization history
This is altered version, a deep thank and appreciation to Terence George Craddock. His structure make this write more stronger again thanks Terence
for this golden touch. Readers, It's worth to spend your time to visit hispage..
Equality is precious quality of souls, and quantity of quality should be our identity. Not forgettable, credit to Eldritch Mungo as he contribute a line for this write..a line never mean less the power is there :) tq 'Eldritch'
Copyright © Unwritten Soul&Terence George Craddock


Comments about Universal Love (Ft Terence George Craddock) by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/30/2017 3:15:00 AM)


    An amazing write on universal love with a hope to be new goldenA- age for new youth. It may be quoted...

    This is government of real civilization
    New golden age for new youth
    Where each hand holds hands
    Faith buries dark ages vain
    Free to love and to be loved
    The world need love revolution
    My words are not tounge sensation
    Toward perfection link the junction
    For hearts sharing love, life license.

    I appreciate this poem Thanks for sharing.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/30/2017 3:07:00 AM)


    An amazing write on universal love with a hope to be new golden age for new youth. It may be quoted...

    This is government of real civilization
    New golden age for new youth
    Where each hand holds hands
    Faith buries dark ages vain
    Free to love and to be loved
    The world need love revolution
    My words are not tounge sensation
    Toward perfection link the junction
    For hearts sharing love, life license.

    I appreciate this poem Thanks for sharing.
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  • (5/3/2017 5:07:00 AM)


    Wow...what an amazing collaboration by two very talented poets. A powerful message of universal love which would surely lead to universal peace. What a wonderful world we can create by being more tolerant and forgiving toward one another.10+ (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (5/8/2017 6:56:00 AM)

    Simone, i never though people will rediscover my old poem again..Terrence/ terry is a terrific nice poet...so i would give him credits more that should take because of his willingness to polish the idea and make it nice, the part that not really nice maybe it was mine hahaha...i was new that time :) and people like you and him..as well as other friends here keep me growing as a writer :) Thanks Simone Inez Harriman

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/22/2016 5:30:00 AM)

    Love and life
    The truth! Melting the ice. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Flower Navarre (11/10/2016 10:49:00 PM)


    Awesome Write! ! ! Very Powerful! ! ! Love Uninhibited! ! ! Freely! ! ! Brings Life To ALL! ! ! Beautiful Write! ! !
    Added To Favorites! ! ! Such Beautiful Thoughts! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! !
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/12/2016 7:51:00 AM)


    Immerse confidence! ! With the muse of the joy of writing. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (12/22/2015 5:35:00 PM)


    I remember so well the joy of writing this poem with Unwritten Soul, the joy of writing, the joy of creation and in this poem the joy of sharing creation. The theme of melting ice I had used in other poems, especially 'A Season Of Growth' which I had posted in my old site but never added the last stanzas too.

    'Universal Love' is a bitter sweet memory me for me. I remember the melting ice and playing with those words. Upon leaving Indonesia in 2013 I lost a disc with all my poetry files before April 2011 so this poem finished in May is the only file poem I have from that era, although almost all poems between April 2011 and June 2013 would have been posted on poemhunter.com under my original posting site of Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light) .

    So without Unwritten Soul having posted 'Universal Love' here I would now have no memory of the poem and I particularly remember what we wanted to achieve with that poem, the correspondence during the shared adaptive writing. The journey continues Soul God Bless :)
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  • Kelvin Owusu (12/3/2012 7:24:00 PM)


    each line compliments extremely well, such a beautiful piece of poetry a great collaboration (Report) Reply

  • (3/15/2012 12:58:00 PM)


    Holy spirit, holy stone! Read this poem of my fellow poet with soul as she is soul and she has a great soul, However, Unity and fraternity are ideals needed in this world of robots.

    After going through the poem, I words of Swami Vivekananda rejigged in my brain, Patriotism is above religion and internationalism is beyond patriotism..... A poem with depth meaning

    For jotting this poem, to the poet, a lovely begonia! :) :) :)
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 1, 2012


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