When I Dance........1 Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

When I Dance........1

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When I dance......
I feel like a serene river flowing......
So cool..... like a swan floating in water.

When I dance,
I feel like a mountain too,
So steady…..standing in a majestic posture.

At times, flowing and moving,
At times, steady and in balance.

Teaching me to flow with the tide
Teaching me to remain calm and composed.

When I Dance........1
Thursday, March 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,flow,life,nature,teacher
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dancing is a well cooling art.10

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Valsa George 24 March 2020

When I dance...... I feel like a serene river flowing...... So cool..... like a swan floating in water. I can imagine how happy you will be when pursuing the passion of your heart! You are a born dancer and you see it as a mission of your life. With deep spiritual moorings in you, I feel it lifts you to an ethereal realm.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 March 2020

WOw great Photography The Dance is your life The Dance is your ultimate life The Dance is immortality............

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Indira Renganathan 22 March 2020

'Teaching me to flow with the tide Teaching me to remain calm and composed.'....words out of true dedication to dance...yes dance and music are yoga only....music is Nadha yoga and dance is Natya yoga....keep this going Geeta..God bless you...10

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Ravi Kopra 21 March 2020

jab main naachti hoon lagta hai dariya shaanti main beh raha hai main ek pahaaD hoon ruka hua, aalishaan, khaDa hua kabhi behti huee, kabhi chalti huee kabhi khaDi huee, kabhi ruki huee seekhti hoon main kaisay dhaara main beh rehi hoon kaisay main shaant hoon, ungbhoot hoon main

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 12 January 2024

Keep dancing. This beautiful way. Attaractive piece

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

When I dance part 1 is an amazing, gorgeously written poem, dear Dr. Geeta, I have only Cum-Laudes for you, the highest appreciations for your loved art, that lives in the utmost inside of your being.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

When I am reading this beautiful poem, your brilliant performance comes to live again, I constantly SEE you dancing, because I am a paintress too next to poetry.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

Great Beauty you have worded here, dear Dr. Geeta, my dear friend, having read this, I still remember your elegant way of danceing in Amsterdam, I am very fond of watching dance performances and there I met YOU.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2021

I feel like a serene river flowing...... So cool..... like a swan floating in water.....it's true dear madam. You are a blessed soul. I have a lot of respect for dancers, the representatives of the divine art. You are a passionate dancer and a wonderful poetess as well...Namaskar!

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