Whenever You Call My Name (Here I Am) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Whenever You Call My Name (Here I Am)

Rating: 4.2


You stand far away
Hiding and invisible
Chest has no movement
Pulses of you weaken
Restless breath with the fear pace
Living contra out of the peace case
If u believe me
Just hold my hand
You will never fight alone
Here i am to be with you
You will never be alone
Remember me, supporting bone

If you ever believe in me
Could you show me what is in your hand?
Perhaps i cant really feel but maybe i can peel
Life keeps challenged in the future only few just past
As much as the sands life tricks covering the earth crust
But...Real deal is when you agree to mend
So...Here i am, together and stronger to stand
Why afraid to climb this tall barrier wall
Trust me i will catch you anytime if u fall
As long as you believe in me...
I am here for you and it's true

Bruises wound stained kiss on your vein
Let the dirty blood flew out your pain
Bring out your bitterness to drain
Just awhile and scars just remind you
About the past and what you will gain
Underneath you the skin dividing anew
Nothing will pinch your flesh for long
If you protect your body with faith and spirit
If you still bleeding and whenever u in need
Here i am to bandage your wound again
But...If only you believe in me
Do you believe me?

So tell me...
If you trust me
Will the moon always hiding behind the clouds forever
Will the night forever miss the moonlight on the calm river
Your presence in this darkness around
Equally a moon that share us gleaming light
Look at you, wearing crown of the night
Night of course without the sun
But Moonlight derived from original sunshine
So dont hide behind the clouds, share us the light
Or dont tell me the moon comforts behind the clouds
Your hidden potential will unleashes secret proud

Listen to me if you believe me
Look here, there or anywhere
But your face must only toward the light
So you step way ahead easy in the bright
Look there, here and anywhere
But dont choose turn to the dark at the back
Then you will haunted by the ghost of the past
Misery of the road blur, shadow lost your way

If you there
Cry for the mystery fears
Give me a cup of your salty tears
Then if you smile with sincere
Treat me with your sweet candy cheers
Just dare to share whatever even it is rare
Anytime u call
Here I am for you
I said it all true

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Sometimes when we feel we are weak that mean we in stage to
be stronger, and to be stronger we will meet few challenges
and the true portion of the spirit is your flesh and yourself.
Running this world togetherness we should..hold each other to live.
The world is meaningful word when it's about care, love and helping
everyone whoever in need unconditionally. We were born incomplete
and we need everyone to make us complete. A perfection of the ideal living can be achieved whenever we reform a life with multiple strength
from everyone..Harmonize in melodious tunes to carry strongest will
* This poem was inspired by my last poem 'perfect lie'
Love yourself cause you play at least a role and you are loved
the way you are. Thank you for reading, hope you all like it,
sorry if there are some mistakes..just wrote and post it instantly
_Unwritten Soul
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 02 May 2011

What a great feeling and concern for humanity! Ready to offer help for the one who is in distress is a great universal value of life which is diminishing in the present context. It is a wonderful attempt to awaken people towards greater values of life. Beautiful feelings and imagery are used. son, it is a great piece of work. Marks 10+++ Rekhamandagere

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Shadow Girl 29 July 2011

wow that was so beautiful, so intense...proud to call u my lil bro'! ! ! SG

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Stefanie Fontker 11 September 2011

Very beautiful, you have a way with words, and talent for writing poetry. This is a sweet poem, you don't seem to have a mean bone in you.

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Harindhar Reddy 14 March 2012

Every poet is busy making his/her poem more crafty and more catchy forgetting the matter is more important than the verse in the poem. However, I see your style of writing is natural and with true feeling from the heart, yup, when yes we need to trust each other in love or friendship and we have to stay together through thick and thin.... It's great feeling to read your poems as Humanity is petered out in this world and I find it in your Verse! To the poet, a cherry Blossom flower! ha ha :) :) :)

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2019

What you bring out so well is the idea that life is so counter-intuitive. Joy demands a cup of tears. Seeming weakness is but the sign of greater strength...This gem goes to myfavourites.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2017

A strong evidence has given by a person to other saying he is or she is with him or her. In this base you, dear Soul, have inscribed this poem in a captivating way. Let me quote few lines.... If you ever believe in me Could you show me what is in your hand? Perhaps i cant really feel but maybe i can peel Life keeps challenged in the future only few just past As much as the sands life tricks covering the earth crust But...Real deal is when you agree to mend So...Here i am, together and stronger to stand Why afraid to climb this tall barrier wall Trust me i will catch you anytime if u fall As long as you believe in me... I am here for you and it's true We were born incomplete and we need everyone to make us complete. A perfection of the ideal living can be achieved whenever we reform a life with multiple strength. Beautifully crafted poem with a noble hope amazingly shared.10

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Rebecca Navarre 20 October 2016

Love The Way Your Heart Flows! ! ! So Strong with Love, Life, Truth and Depth! ! ! You are Blessed With Such A Very Precious Talent to Touch So Many and Feel as You Feel! ! ! Another Really Wonderful Write! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 20 October 2016

Thank you so much Rebecca...you also have such a great words in your soul to share and to stand...Thanks for your kind heart, time and everything :) Big sunshine for you :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 June 2016

Just dare to share whatever even it is rare! ! ! To care for all mankind. Nice work.

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Frank James Davis 12 April 2013

Whether or not this is a first draft, it's incredible work. Awe-inspiring offering, Soul!

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