Romeo Della Valle

Freshman - 717 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

Who Am I? - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

I am the leftovers of yesterday,
Today's joy and sorrow
And maybe the source of inspiration
For unknown writers of tomorrow...
Uncertain of my own destination,
Only you and the Lord
May have a clear answer
For this puzzle of my life...

Yesterday: a poet, lover and dancer,
Today: old, tired and facing a strife
And tomorrow: singing to the world
Through somebody else, perhaps,
But still sending my message of love,
Always humble like the one above...

I am the color of a rainbow's end,
Camouflaged by light,
Blending into blue sparkling patterns,
Made sandy bright,
Leaving a trace of footprints, then,
I am gone with the tide...

*Dedicated to all my poet friends in PH and PF...


Comments about Who Am I? by Romeo Della Valle

  • Jonathan MaldonadoJonathan Maldonado (4/4/2012 3:54:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this its funny how we all ask our selves the same questions, but at that moment we ask we feel so alone. Romeo thank you for sharing your work and i appreciate the feedback you give on mine.
    God bless
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  • Rosmin Elsa MohanRosmin Elsa Mohan (3/29/2012 1:12:00 AM)

    its obvious that we don't have an answer...
    But i love all your lines... magical...

    Keep writing Romeo..
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  • Theresa Moore (2/26/2012 11:29:00 AM)

    Well written, a true expression of life lived to the fullest. (Report)Reply

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  • Linda L. Franklin (11/6/2011 6:16:00 PM)

    very nicely said. I really enjoyed it.
    Sincerely,
    Linda
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  • Tina Mack (8/9/2011 10:20:00 PM)

    Wow again! Your words make me feel like when I am listening to a good song that takes me away to that place.... I commend your skills. Rated it a 10! ! ! Keep writing. Isn't funny how individuals are so different but when you read poetry it takes on a whole new form. (Report)Reply

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  • Luz HanaiiLuz Hanaii (7/31/2011 11:43:00 PM)

    I glad I started to read your work. You amaze me... great talent! (Report)Reply

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  • ItalianxRainbowx Ninjaz (7/29/2011 4:29:00 PM)

    This was amazing.There are no words to explain how beautiful, your work is. There no end to your talent.I plan on reading more from you! Thank you for sharing this, with all of us. (Report)Reply

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  • Joseph Anderson (2/19/2011 2:32:00 PM)

    This poem should be rated-it made me pause and think=I still do that
    at 86-great write-worth a 10
    Joe
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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (12/5/2010 12:01:00 AM)

    'I am the color of rainbow'end....' What a sparkling imagery! Certainly you have a lot of talent to raise the question about your own existence in such a remarkable way.
    I liked the poem for its style and thoughts.
    Very poignant indeed.
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  • Rob Rayner (12/4/2010 11:46:00 PM)

    Still singing through yourself, still sending your message of love. Thanks. Thanks for the encouragement (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 4, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 29, 2012


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