Who Am I? Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Who Am I?

Rating: 4.5

I'm emotional
To you all my liking
One of the insane character

In the scriptures of love, I am ignorant
In the comprehension of love, I am a constant failure learner

Your affectionate smile, your shy look,
The obscure ripples of the lips pair
Kills me over and over again
At the center of this fascinated emotion

When I look back at the moonlight
It illuminates the world with your beauty

In the words of the morning hymn,
in the verse of the song, in the stanza of the poem
Hither, thither, everywhere I find your name

of the blooming flowers in the garden
In every petal, I get your engraved name

The alphabet of all the languages of the world
Just write your name in my heart

I am insane in you, I am the Farhad of that Shirin
Forgetting himself who was only mad at Shirin

I can only see wherever I look
A reflection of your precious mysterious colors

I'm not anymore myself
Tell me, who am I?


© Mahtab Bangalee
10.11.2020 Chittagong

Tuesday, November 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
o poet me poet yeps poet 10 November 2020

you are you a reflection of your own mind you are you if you think only negatively you are not you so think positively see beauty in my eyes stare deep within and see your own reflection i am the mirror you look at daily but quickly you forget me and absentmindedly ask me daily who am i question yourself apply your mind i gave you for free my son now use it before you return it to me till then use it daily polish it then only you will know are you and i who

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Valsa George 10 November 2020

" In the words of the morning hymn, in the verse of the song, in the stanza of the poem Hither, thither, everywhere I find your name" When one is 'head over heels in love', it so happens that in whatever he sees and hears, he sees only her face and sound! He merges with his lover so much that he loses his separate identity! A poem on the great impact of love!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 November 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly splendid.....5 stars *****

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 November 2020

The alphabet of all the languages of the world Just write your name in my heart A passionate love poem so full of exquisite imagery! Wonderfully penned, dear Poet Mahtab........5 stars

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Varsha M 11 November 2020

Another resphody. Very beautifully picked the topic and painted it beautifully with artistic touch of expression. Thank-you for your eminent piece of work.

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

fabulous your thought- here you have glorified the thoughtful self; great thought provoking

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Yiyan Han 14 November 2020

Well, you were " the Farhad of that Shirin" , as you told us ;) Thanks for sharing, and just looked some info re the tragic romance by the Persian poet Nizami Ganjavi (1141–1209) which is also told under the titles " Shirin and Farhad" .

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Khairul Ahsan 13 November 2020

'Hither, thither, everywhere I find your name' - this happens when one is in deep love.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 November 2020

In love we loose our identity, that's why Manoor said, Haw (I am God) .

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 11 November 2020

a marvelous piece of expression...10+

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