With My Self Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

With My Self

Rating: 5.0


They said, come join us
We can all stay together
We can have lot of fun
We can even save money
Why you stay alone?

Then I said with a smile
I am not living alone
I am living with my self
And living with lot of joy
And I never get bore with it

Said, it sketches very well
I enjoy watching it sketches
I see how it shapes the lines
I forget my time watching it
It presents me lot of gifts

It also writes lines for me
Ones it writes in rhymes
Once it writes with feel
I’m the first one to read
It always inspires me a lot

It also gives me knowledge
It is a voracious reader
It tells me many things
It feeds me with thoughts
It’s my best teacher ever

It also acts like a small kid
I enjoy with it lot of time
It likes to play video games
It beats the gods and evils
It wins fifa and grand slams

So I am living with many
I’m living with inspiration
I’m living with a teacher
And living with small kid
And with lot of fun and joy

So I’m not living alone
Said, no money can buy it
Nor any company can do it
It’s my lives real true friend
So I am living with my self

I said and left with a smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you're like me.. multiply personalities, , , lool.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 15 May 2009

yeah self is the true friend and self is the foe.........if it controlled then it is friend otherwise it is foe..........A Good Write.....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 May 2009

This is what is called as 'Atma Rati' or 'Anthar mukham'. In English we can say introspection etc. Very well written.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

so you are happy with your blessed self! thanks...imaginative work

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Joseph Poewhit 15 May 2009

Being by one's self brings much understanding

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Antonio Liao 24 January 2010

It’s the smile that tells the heart...as the soul dreamingly waits for that Beauty to come....oh! flourishing soul waits my destiny for the wind gather flower for you my dear heart....you got my passion my friend...excellent poem...God bless...a 10 +++++++++

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to be with yourself is possible even amidst a crowd

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Catrina Heart 17 May 2009

To live with my self is a nice vivid theme. To have a true communion with yourself is a splendor things for all your thoughts and actions goes in unison and soundly behaves to the nature....Thanks!

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

we are all students, teachers, and writers, and some more than others. good write

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Eyan Desir 16 May 2009

Kranthi can I say this comment as a friend? ok this poem is nice... But most of your poems Have the same pattern I want to see A different kind of poetry from you..... 10s........

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