Y.... No Time Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.... No Time

Rating: 4.9


Some cutters of wood
cannot find the time
to sharpen their axe
to sharpen their saw

Some drivers of cars
cannot find the time
to service their cars
to fill up the fuel

Some human souls
cannot find the time
to read poetry
to pray or do good

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 20 April 2012

Excellent and so true.

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Unwritten Soul 19 April 2012

Cherry blossoms always find time once in a year to celebrate their life...we must find our time too to spice up life with beneficial things...If wood cutter not sharpening the axes soon it will takes more time to cut hard wood..axes got blunder in each cut. and car without fuel will cost driver to walk and takes more time compared to a bit time sacrifice to service/fill them with fuels...So we can see if we not use thing correctly we will not get any benefit but charge on our life....time can save future time or even cost to consume more time...and time is a starter for our time consumption...like an investment it is a same thing, we have this life and life has the time to stick together, so what use of life if the whole time we spent is to waste it, so we never see how important life we are making....at least fight for better life, it is the best and worthier than do nothing..we making life more life in saved time...It's okay if our life is not good currently as remember that's like a wood cutter, we must spent life better to cut wood...sharpening it! fight for life, and do many deeds too_Unwritten Soul

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May Witwit 15 April 2012

That's what people are like. They are so engrossed by life they tend to forget the necessities. Good thinking. Thank you for sharing

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Dave Walker 13 April 2012

Like it, people never find the time, then when they do It's too late. A great poem.

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Heather Wilson 13 April 2012

SO to the point and how wise, thank you.

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Walterrean Salley 12 May 2012

Life is all about prioritizing - putting first things first. But we so often miss the mark, putting trivial things first, and the most important things are next to last on the list. Great thought here.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 April 2012

'...Some human souls/cannot find the time/ to read poetry...' You've cracked the nut to enjoy the.kernel...by the emotive readers...unfortunately Poetics are becoming...an ideal time-pass to..I'd say material world...you've reached the gamut ...but poets like you will not refrain to write for refineds...tenner...Regards ~ niv PS Please comment on ' Narco Neroism Bonfire Ride' n

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Valerie Dohren 26 April 2012

Brilliant - time is precious, we should use it well.

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Ramesh Rai 26 April 2012

xlent, well versed. it is true thre are least readers of poems, but they read with core of heart. keep it up.

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Vipins Puthooran 25 April 2012

Excellent and beautiful! ! !

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