A Wild Exotic Poem by JOE POEWHIT

A Wild Exotic

Rating: 4.3


Where does my mind start? Where does my mind end? No
expanse to the ultimate, the thoughts do not stop. Time does
not stop. It is all in perpetual motion. All a vibration in the
universe. Constant it is, alive in the conception. I am me,
a presence of GODS creation.

When will it ever stop? When will it begin again? Yet, I am
a part of this vibration, a cord or note, in the music of the
universe. My song of life, played out in the discourse of
being. I am a being, a place, and moment in all of time.

I sing my song. Then, I am a part of all time. All of time, is
before me, in this creation of time. Here for a moment and
gone to another place. Yet, all of myself, is this conception
of a place and time.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 12 December 2009

If you'd like to read the flip side of your poem... try 'Crucible'.Regards Sally

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Moonbee Canady 19 November 2009

A Truly Deep Thought Poem... Gives The Reader, Something To Think About... You Expressed Eternity, Beautifully in the Symbolism of a Song... A Very Enjoyable Read... MoonBee

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Ezna Stephna 13 November 2009

really wonderful poem, nicely expressed.......thanks for sharing 10++

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Costa Anakiev 31 October 2009

I love the ideas you put in. Konstantin.

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

Yet, I am a part of this vibration, a cord or note, in the music of the universe. Rachel Ann Butler

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Meggie Gultiano 09 July 2010

simply beautiful...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 July 2010

Macrocosm and Microcosm in relation…meditative stuff … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Raj Arumugam 17 February 2010

an interesting meditation on the expansiveness of the mind

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Abby Keen/harris 11 February 2010

wonderful! ! ! im not religous but i liked this poem.

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Sylvi Sylva 25 January 2010

a wonderful expression of sense of being...almost an identity, another brilliant read. a ten plus!

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