About You Poem by Deborah Cromer
About You
It is time to tell you what you need to hear
My survival lives in the thought of having you near
When you are close to me, I lose all control
You take my breath away and hold my soul
I believe you are beautifully formed and made
No price to look upon such fineness can be paid
I am struck in amazement at your incredible sight
Surrounding you always is a warm, heavenly, glowing light
Your eyes and your face, they capture my heart
Your body and movements to begin just the start
The start of my dream, I wish I could share
I often think of telling you, but I do not dare
I think of what it might be like to hold you now
To be looking up into your eyes of magic somehow
I wish a wish to be laying down close with you
I live to get lost and escape into your eyes of blue
Sometimes I stop breathing when I imagine your hair
I close my eyes and I dream of it, on your shoulders bare
Long and glowing, so soft to see and maybe touch
I want to keep it close to me, so very much
I want to feel your flowing hair, falling on my bare skin
Opening my mouth, I feel your tongue moving in
My heart beats hard, loud and ever so strong
A pleasure overtakes my body so endlessly long
I cannot catch my breath, I cannot hold back sound
You in my dreams are the lover I have never found
A taste of your love and just one kiss
Why is it I forever wish for and dream of this
One does not often see on poem hunter a free style poem with such impeccable and well thought out rhyme, Deborah. Though this fine poem may have been written long ago, it is well written and expressive and I am sure if the man it was intended for ever read it, he would like it very much. Hopefully, you and he are now one! Carl.
Hi Debbie - this is so so beautiful and so so evocative. 'You take my breath away' 'Your eyes your face they capture my heart' 'I wish a wish to be lying down close with you'. This describes perfectly what it is like to be really really in love with someone - lovely. I would give you a TEN if the poem had stopped there but there is so so much more, You perfect love poem gets very tactile 'I want to feel your flowing hair falling on my bare skin' and then the kiss. You and I both know that one perfect kiss is all it takes to seal one's love and you describe it so so perfectly. 'Opening my mouth I feel your tongue moving in - You in my dreams are the lover I have never found' - awesome. 'The taste of your love and just one kiss'. Tha's all it takes just ONE KISS. We all wish Debbie and we all dream - thanks for putting our experience into the most beautiful poem I have ever read on PH. Love you in Poetry - JOHN
A well penned and poignant write! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...
this is a wonderfully written and versed piece. i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it.
Hello That was a very sweet poem... Well explained to whom ever you are talkin to :)
Debbie, you’ve written an extremely sensual poem that could work for both sexes, but I personally feel it is a little more applicable if a man had written it about his lovely lady lover. Even though the poem contains many familiar lines….., it’s smooth, moves nicely, and is definitely a ‘crowd pleaser'….! ! ! The short, sweet title works really well. Yes, anyone who has felt the passion of true love will relate to your “ABOUT YOU.” I enjoyed it very much & keep up the fine writing. Best regards, Trade.
'I believe you are beautifully formed and made No price to look upon such fineness can be paid I am struck in amazement at your incredible sight Surrounding you always is a warm, heavenly, glowing light' Rachel Ann Butler
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wow......Deborah you are taking my breath away romantic, beautiful Its ppl like you that makes poemhunter great..thank you Excellent job 10x10...