An Ode Of River Rhyme Poem by adheez van der beanthz

An Ode Of River Rhyme

Rating: 4.7


The mountains
that paint Terra's face
too arrogant to share diction
The sea
that blanketed by rainbow
so haughty to translated languages
Only river so faithful
sow the word seeds
pick the script verses
then harvest it into a love poem
that inscribed on the cloud body
entrusted to the horizon soul
till the wind deliver it
To you..
my magnificent longing

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maya Hanson 11 February 2014

Pretty and thought provoking :) i like it! ~mye3

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 February 2014

Very lovely

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Maria Goodison 17 January 2014

Enjoyed reading this one well done keep it up.

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Far Lapenna 11 January 2014

Beautiful, beautiful poetry, I love the amount of emotion you express in this poem

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Emily Angel 05 January 2014

Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.

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Prasanna Kumari 02 April 2014

good poem with unique expression bringing unique thought....

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2014

Stunning imagery and so beautifully expressed!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 March 2014

Wow wind dispersal of poetry, thanx to dear ol poemhunter to convey great poems like this. Imaginative. Tc.

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Jemima Rivas 18 March 2014

very smooth it glides love it :)

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Bing Hua 18 February 2014

Good poem. I like it

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