adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

An Ode Of River Rhyme - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

The mountains
that paint Terra's face
too arrogant to share diction
The sea
that blanketed by rainbow
so haughty to translated languages
Only river so faithful
sow the word seeds
pick the script verses
then harvest it into a love poem
that inscribed on the cloud body
entrusted to the horizon soul
till the wind deliver it
To you..
my magnificent longing

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  • (4/2/2014 9:57:00 PM)

    good poem with unique expression bringing unique thought.... (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (3/28/2014 5:59:00 PM)

    Stunning imagery and so beautifully expressed! (Report)Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/27/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    Wow wind dispersal of poetry, thanx to dear ol poemhunter to convey great poems like this. Imaginative. Tc. (Report)Reply

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  • Jemima Rivas (3/18/2014 7:42:00 AM)

    very smooth it glides love it :) (Report)Reply

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  • Bing Hua (2/18/2014 9:37:00 PM)

    Good poem. I like it (Report)Reply

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  • (2/11/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    Pretty and thought provoking :) i like it!
    ~mye3
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  • (2/7/2014 7:08:00 AM)

    Very lovely (Report)Reply

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  • Maria Goodison (1/17/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    Enjoyed reading this one well done keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • Far Lapenna (1/11/2014 2:30:00 PM)

    Beautiful, beautiful poetry, I love the amount of emotion you express in this poem (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Al-balushi (12/24/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    full of love and emotion, well write (Report)Reply

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  • (12/24/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Truly a lovely write, full of emotions and imagery.
    Enjoyed reading this verse. So beautiful....
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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (12/23/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Only river so faithful
    sow the word seeds
    pick the script verses
    then harvest it into a love poem.......

    though the look is restricted by window, yet, it illustrates the purposeful view to show the reader a part of life, in other parts river carries many things....many...many.... Well written.
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  • Patricia Grantham (12/23/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Very nicely written with good details. Nature expressed in such a
    lovely way. Just like love flowing from the rivers and bursting with
    such beauty. Enjoyed. Keep on penning with power.
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  • (12/22/2013 4:40:00 PM)

    This is so sweet and lovely! (Report)Reply

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  • Savita Tyagi (12/22/2013 8:09:00 AM)

    Beautiful, poetic tribute to rivers life blood for humans. Enjoyed it. (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan Kaul (12/22/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    Everything that is in nature do inspire us to write and It is wish of every poet to create through nature. Beautiful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (12/22/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Nature so beautifully captured in it's unique essence to deliver your love in such a magnificent way! (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh T A (12/22/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    Whole Nature seems to be at your service to deliver your love longing to your lady! Wonderful, my dear fellow! You are lucky indeed to have a nice service for your love! (Report)Reply

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  • Matt Mooney (12/22/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    A great concept-nature being beyond translation, well handled in this lovely poem.The river seems to have its own language which it shares with the poet indirectly. I like the shape, structure and language of the poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 24, 2013


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