Dissolute Unity Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Dissolute Unity

Rating: 4.9


The shore of genetic craving is awakened
on the fertile land of genital limb

The stars of the unopposed sky are burning
in the free-spirited mind

The hungry body is wishing to gratify itself
But the mind is demonstrator on that pelf

If the mind and body lives not together
Then the unity of love will be dissolute fair

24.10.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, October 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,lust,marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2020

on the fertile land of genital LAMB READ MY POEM MEN ARE WIRED DIFFERENTLY FOR MEN THERE IS ONLY ONE THING SAVE UR PROSTATE ONLY IT IS MORE THAN HEAVENLY MAKES LIFE LONG AND ACTIVE MANYMOST PRACTICE REGULARLY ASK ANY THEY WILL SMILE ONLY '] U 2 WILL MB

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2020

on the fertile land of genital LAMBS MB

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2020

on the fertile land of genital limb

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2020

A perceptive write! Appreciated the undertone. Top 🌟

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Very true... If the mind and body lives not together Then the unity of love will be dissolute fair.....5****

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Indira Renganathan 04 November 2020

A lovely poem with meaningful ending words 'If the mind and body lives not together Then the unity of love will be dissolute fair'.....very true...great work...5 stars

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

'If the mind and body lives not together Then the unity of love will be dissolute fair' - that's true!

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Susan Williams 25 October 2020

If the mind and body lives not together Then the unity of love will be dissolute fair- - - - - > very true, tragically true. well done, Mahtab

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 October 2020

Love is a beautiful emotion when reciprocated. May the live unite two souls into one. Nice poem.5**

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 October 2020

'If the mind and body lives not together Then the unity of love will be dissolute fair, '.. is beautiful lines. Thanks for sharing.

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