Unwritten Soul

Eternal Love - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Childhood is my old home with you
Here, in heart is where you build it
for your love stay last you said
I know it maybe few years
But this sweet memories
Always keep me safe,
shelter my soul again
Protect me from pain
Yes time may flies
No i wont forget
For love you are
This is home
i will ever stay
In anywhere i am
With you, in my heart

O those Innocent days
Missed and now
gone behind
and leave me
alone without you
my dear mom
my dear love
and all times

Tears wont cry
water wont flow
Still i do cry
Breeze wipe cold
Times freeze my soul
For a while i stare upon past
returned to your shadows
Silence is a way we talk here
To bring good old smiles
With color resurfacing eyes
Memories recalled
Whispered to me
Like i hearing you
Again and again
A calling voice
A voice
of Yours
but time has come
and we have to say goodbye
I always try but i never believe it
They may say i lied but to me you not die
But just only unseen by eyes
because in heart
still have you
with me
our perfect home
My sole heart

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Dedicate this writing to my friend, Sunprincess and her late mother.As her mom gone last year on Dec14, And Also dedicate this poem to Kee Thamphi who always live his life with her late mother...This poem dedicate to two of my good friends here...Dears, May God protect us from sorrows and let love eternal...Yes Love is eternal in our home, our hearts. Dear sunprincess my friend, dont cry just believe that your mom is always living in your heart so keep happy so she will feel the same inside and above_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Eternal Love by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/9/2018 9:56:00 AM)

    Part - 2
    Dear Soul, you have so nicely presented this poem on account of the death of mother of your friend Sunprincess. It is a great tribute to her mother and nice dedication to Kee Thamphi who always lives his life with her late mother.
    Thanks for sharing.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/9/2018 9:54:00 AM)

    Part - 1
    We often remember the memories of childhood how did we spend the time with friends, parents and with brothers, and sisters. Especially the love of mother and her sweet voices are rememberable. When mother's soul leaves body we often feel grief but soul is immortal and it takes next birth. (continued)
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  • (6/12/2017 12:44:00 PM)

    This is amazing, Soul. Childhood is everyone's old home. At some point in life we all return. We all have losses, experience tragedies, and so we may be prompted on that path of return. When we arrive, we find peace and rediscover our perfect home. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (6/13/2017 12:13:00 AM)

    One of the Greatest thing we may have is to have a spacious heart, this space is to keep other greatest thing, and the best..the ones who we treasured most in our beating life, our family and friends who ever live in our life....something can make a tragedy in our heart, but as it a home for many beloved ones inside...i think it copes for us to heal easier...and to put smile again after cry :) Thank you my sweet friend MJ lemon :)

  • Dee Corpolongo (9/30/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    With the tears in my eyes, which is truly no surprise, , , , my thoughts turn to my MOM, whom I miss all the time...
    Beautiful poem made for a friend~ with your loving words that you send...being the beautiful SOUL that you are..
    with a heart so beautiful to possess.
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/8/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Touching poem Soul...Really Mothers love is eternal..Loved reading each lines..
    Fantastic write...
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  • Farah Ilyas (6/3/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    Touching poem with the message to have soft heart+corner for others, May her mother in rest & peace forever (aamin) ....your support & favor must work wonders for these suffering beings hopefully, always be happy you indeed have a fertile soul planted by love of nature..well done (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2013 3:31:00 PM)

    You have a warm, profound sensitivity to fellow human beings; the impact of your tender and perceptive poetry certainly reflects that.
    Eternal Love is gratifying to read!
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  • (2/1/2013 8:12:00 PM)

    Your heart touches others....living! Great piece. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (1/10/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    lovely poem, i enjoyed it fully... (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2012 11:12:00 AM)

    Heart warming poem Soul, I can also relate to it. Its people like you that really gives us courage in trying times coz we know that they care...thanks a million times, and to my sisters Kee and Sunprincess, it was meant to be..and like Soul said, they are not dead coz they live with us daily, we always feel their spirits...
    Siya_! !
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/26/2012 3:41:00 PM)

    mother's love is eternal! ! ! ! 'tis a great poem dear soul! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (12/22/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    This is such a lovely poem. You are right, my friend the love of the mother lives on in our lives forever. The care I received from my mother, lives on in my heart and I hope it will continue to live on in the hearts of those whom I care for. In that way we eternalise perhaps not the life but at least the love of our mothers. The bitter remembrance of her death, with time, makes place for the many sweet memories she gave to us. IF we can let go of the guilt feeling (all of us did not enough of what our mother liked and perhaps too much of what she didn't like, but if we think about it, truly, a mother forgives her children on the spot without us having to ask forgiveness) , yes if we can let go of the guilt feeling, we will speed up the process a lot to enjoy the sweet remembrance of our mother and leave behind the bitterness. Of course we will miss our mothers forever, but somewhere her love and her spirit is still with us.
    I thought, while reading this poem, wow, Soul is really opening up here, writing these superb and wonderful lines about his mom, but then I read the comments. It is great to try and console friends with such beautiful poetry. If you can write so touchingly and almost perfectly about someone else's mom, I really look forward to the poem about your own
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  • Valerie Dohren (12/22/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    Christmas is a time of sadness for many who have lost loved ones - I lost my mother when I was just 16, and my father many years ago too. A lovely poem Soul. (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2012 11:42:00 AM)

    On behalf of our two PH pals your appealing write is touching.So nice of you to console them with this wonderful write. True.The departed souls will ever be living in their hearts. (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    May the duo in distress be solaced at these lines! I too join their memoirs with my mother gone 43 years and my father gone last year. As death has no equations, we have to compromise with the hard reality and our life has to go on... (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (12/18/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    made me so so so sad.
    a feel of regret and sorrow simultaneously invade to my minde.

    the reason of dying
    the reason of crying
    the reason of bless
    dont make a mess
    of your own life........

    really love is eternal.we might seek the true love in our childhood in our mom's arms.i do not know what to say to relieve my friend(sunprincess and kee thamphi) i just can say peace be upon them.this is my condole.

    i am so greatful thankful of this wonderful poem.~nb
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  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (12/17/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    This love is so beautiful, because not too many child loves their mother this deep. Anyway those who dies will live in our heart, but in the world we already learned what we had to and they learned from us what they had to, that is why they had to live. Some people just moves away into another country, but some dies and only God knows the reason. Lovely thoughts and lovely words. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/17/2012 12:30:00 AM)

    I thankyou Soul for this touching write on behalf of my two friends- Sun princess and Kee Thampi who live in sorrowful memory of their dear departed mothers! I know how hard it is to lose a mother especially at a young age! ! Your goodness of heart to feel for their sorrow and be at their side with a wave of solace is greatly appreciated! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2012 8:57:00 PM)

    the love to Mum.....really thankful for this great poetess([])
    O those Innocent days
    Missed and now
    gone behind
    and leave me
    alone without you
    my dear mom
    my dear love
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  • Poetheart Morgan (12/16/2012 8:22:00 PM)

    This poem warms my heart at the same time i am sad. All of us who have lost someone dear see in his poem sweet relief. TFS Poet. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 17, 2012

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