Eternal Romance… 0507-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Eternal Romance… 0507-2k12

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A lover's delight and everyone's dream
That leaves in eyes a twinkling realm

My land is the land of melodic themes
where charms and trinkets amply gleam

Where age old nature's life ploughs
and lovelorn couple's passion grows

Vireos sing and gurgling brooks aflow
never the fount of youth shall slow

green and gold that stretches on high
Where larks swoop and lovers sigh

The sun never sets and birds that fly
From heavenly bliss they chirping ply

Biker's and trekkers in mounts stride
murmur my lakes with tender tides

spotted dear cavort by the side
Beers by their yearly slumber abide

The rolling land stretches far away
hands are ardent, up when they pray

farmers work magic nights and days
To turn into gold their tilled clay

Where blossoms exude, sing and dance
My home is a place for eternal romance


Original
05 July,2012
Islamabad-Pakistan.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my homeland.... :)

(hum zinda qaum haen)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Israh Sadan 02 August 2012

Wow, such pride in and love for your land. Poetic patriot. Its a very well written poem, giving me almost the same lyrical feeling or flow of Robert Frost's Stopping by woods.

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Rishit Desai 02 August 2012

Beautifully expressed and the beauty is only enhancd by the simplicity in the words and meaning.

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Meena Mustafa 27 July 2012

Home sweet home :)))))))))) It's a great pleasure to read your poems.

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Heather Wilson 27 July 2012

My home is a place for eternal romance.... a beautiful poem, home is where the heart is.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

I fully agree with the other fellow poets: Beautiful! A reservoir of touching words and rich imagery! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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Yasmin Khan 27 April 2013

The land of love and beauty has been admired profusely. Each word and image is used beautifully like beads in a string...'leaves, trinkets, vireos, brooks, larks and so on...a lovely poem

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Joanna Pavlides 02 September 2012

beautiful warm poem, flows perfectly

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Gabrielle Marie 31 August 2012

A lovely poem with a romantic panoramic view

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Sandra Feldman 14 August 2012

Love this poem, eternal romance, that is what the world needs now and always.............

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Annie Ali 06 August 2012

very well written poem... Gives a sublime and beautifully romantic feeling of patriotism and self pride in a whole...

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