From The Gate Of Heaven Poem by Unwritten Soul

From The Gate Of Heaven

Rating: 4.2


Drops of rain
Jump from the sky to the ground
Wonder why they decided to do that
Wonder what they think to come here
Sand on land
Greet upon the surface
But drop of rain run below it
Wonder why they dont stay above
Wonder if they realize this world is tough

I see, now i see
Days or month for me to see
Sending souls to return to the seed
And seeds climb back to the sky
As the trees,
I see, now i see,

Though once they were at the heaven's gate
But to live bliss and to see other missed
Its pitiful, its pitiful
As if the sweet apple
Only known by its sweetness
But no one tasting it...
So let just some to bite
For sweetness is to share
Not to contain and just to keep
Let just share it

I see, now I see
Finally why drops of rain fallen
Its a lesson from gate of heaven
Sending gesture of love from strong to needy
I see, now I finally see.

Saturday, February 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: kindness,lesson,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Rain is the symbol of blessing, I was thinking one day that water in the sky is a mediator to heal current and birthing new life as it fall. To me it is a lesson to human, no matter who you are at least if we have something good in us, the purpose is not only for ourselves, it is for things and people around us as well. But its up to us... To bring the rain or to let the surface dry. And for everyone success that come with our little gesture is like a returning strength to build something from a point. Their success is still our satisfaction and together it is our victory. Good person will leave legacy in any form. Your kindness will.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yoonoos Peerbocus 01 March 2020

a lessen form the gate of..strong to needy.....meaningful ideas set

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Mj Lemon 02 March 2020

All the way from tears of joy, water that cleanses, water for life....it might be traced back to the lowly drops of rain. There is something so calming in this verse, Soul

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

Drop of the rain the life of the nature, the life of seen / unseen numerous being beautiful poem penned and beautiful note

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 March 2020

A great superb muse on heavenly gift of rain that inspired you superbly. This is one of your best poems indeed. Kudos! ! Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, " pink mania inking'

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Akhtar Jawad 05 March 2020

That's the gravitational force of love, a nice poem.

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Anjandev Roy 19 October 2020

This is an outstanding work.......love it........thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

A soothing poem! 'Rain is the symbol of blessing' - indeed! Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. You may be glad to know that my poem 'Parallel Lines, Parallel Lives' has been published in the front page of poemHunter today as the 'Member Poem of the Day'. If you have some time, please read and comment.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 July 2020

Wow the second stanza was esp imaginative and creative in this beautiful raindrops poem. You depict in a fine poetic way, this must be one of your best poems. Kudos. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'the corona catastrophe '

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Hans Vr 24 May 2020

A poem that makes the reader think. In my opinion this is the major quality of a good poem. I agree with the thoughts expressed in these nice verses

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2020

Your thinking about rain is right. Really it is the symbol of blessing. It is a great gift of Nature to us. In the beginning stanza you have so brilliantly inscribed about coming of rain as...Drops of rain / Jump from the sky to the ground..In concluding stanza you have so touchingly delineated about love and kindness of rain fall. A marvelous work.

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