Frozen Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Frozen

Rating: 5.0


quietly, coldness creeps
as the frost grows close
blanketing all with white
warm breath leaves a trail
whisperings of goodbyes
left abandoned shivering,
freezing alone in the night.
bringing a piercing sting
cold has crept bitterly in
turning this heart to ice
hallowed, becoming numb
frostbitten, it slowly cracks
frigid life begins dripping
crimson bled darkness
painfully breaks through
regretfully staining icy frost,
chilling the desolate soul.
released glistening tears
rains over the broken heart
lost and laying forgotten
in darkness forever frozen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 27 January 2012

both vivid and passionate! well done!

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(De Va) 26 January 2012

Your words always amaze me, always make me see the world from a different view, and I feel so much in every word you let fall onto the pallet of your soul...Blessings..n...hugs...DeVa

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Kelsi Brockway 31 January 2012

I really liked this poem because it truly captures the feelings left after a tough break up.

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Darkangel Flyfree 30 January 2012

Again amazing work of art. You write how i feel.

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Dave Walker 30 January 2012

A fantastic poem, once love turns to ice it can take a long time to bring it back. A great poem.

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Pheko Motaung 04 February 2012

Awesome poem! I love every.You're fabulous!

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Kayla Howard 04 February 2012

i am absolutly loving this poem.every time i read it im blown away an actually get the chills! a great write. out of 1-10 u get an 11000000000 :)

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Jason's Gone 04 February 2012

Still spectacular! You just keep surprising me everyday!

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Donnie Wolff 01 February 2012

I think your amazing Slentpoet Grl...

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Cosmic Dreamer 31 January 2012

A haunting wind travels across the surface of my soul, The footsteps of death gain ground with every weary step, Eyes of grey fill with the tears of the condemned, My soul screams out pleading for mercy, Yet the spectre of death has won this race, That soul scream has become my last breath, I sleep entwined forever, heart, mind, body and soul... Death is but a moment... But life is merely the blink of an eye... Why waste that blink yearning for that moment... I love your poems... I hope one day to see you write of rainbows and unicorns... Fantastic write...

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