Giggling Sympathy! Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE
Giggling Sympathy!
Grey heron, on straw of boggy land,
Fry fishes are on swimming competition-
first, second, third…. to the jaw of routine
White clouds are flying by flapping wings
to the evening sky, the mill is ruling
to make new shooters
Falcons are wearing Black Shirts and judging
the sun under stormy darkness, no rains but
tears are shedding as blood on frontier thorns
The speeches on powered stage are honest friend
of nitroglycerin, sorbents, stabilizers….. no massacre;
but the space is the sparkling showcase of superpower!
-Gypsy
No!
-Refugee
No!
-Muslim
Oh! Shut down the life! Cleansing hut is my country
to make Heritage Park of civilization!
Stripped corpse of pregnant widow is floating on
naf river and going to shameless phallus of ocean!
Where are hoary civilized eyes for these seasons?
Mr. Civilized! Look- guest birds are flying as
your jolly fowler, it's your turn all; you can hunt
easily the flying by others with giggling sympathy! !
-September 13,2018 Chattogram
A powerful write of how human beings become less? ..........well written Mahtab
A powerful and thought provoking poem. A great satire and expose of the ills of society. So vividly depicted. Well crafted write.10
Falcons are wearing Black Shirts and judge the sun under stormy darkness, no rains but tears are shedding as blood on frontier thorns - Very vivid and powerful lines about the cruelty of our mortally world. Some of the images(such as the jaw of routine, no massacre but the space is the sparkling showcase of superpower, etc.) are echoing in the air.
post graduate.... no job @ 32 poetry is excellent coming from you 1986 borns are fighters aren't you love independence do you
Another of your master piece poem; great and world appealing......God bless you
Very heart touching and powerfully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++! ..
Mr. Civilized! Look- guest birds are flying as your jolly fowler, it's your turn all; you can hunt easily the flying by others with giggling sympathy! ! Touching expression! A beautiful poem! (10)
To the evening sky! ! ! Seeing the wickedness of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
the umbrella meaning of the poem and its striking metaphors... a nice dramatic style poem...uncommon in words using...thanks for it to share...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Dear Mahtab, you have so touchingly and incisively inscribed about the brutality and inhumanity in this poem. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.10