Abandoning myself in the whirlpool of thoughts
Trying to de-tangle this quagmire of knots
As I try to drown in this ocean of tears
Trying to shed some of my regrets n fears
Searching for the trails of my lost identity
I face up to the lashes of the staunch reality
Groping and stumbling my way in the dark
I look n search for that inner spark
There seems no respite from all this chaos
So I raise my hands towards God in prayers
Extinguishing my inner anger with spirituality
I sum up my faith once again to face the reality.
© Aarzoo Mehek.
I look n search for that inner spark raising my hands in prayers. like it vrey much. dear poetess..
The rhythm and flow of your poetry is amazing. Prayer has a healing power n can give us immense relief from the sound and fury of the world. Your thoughts are very beautifully put. The tone n the rhyme are just perfect. A sure 10. Loved it.
There's light an the end of the tunnel.. Truly there is.. It is just it takes incredible ammount of courage, passion, and hard work to overcome the dark days of our lives.. A spiritual awakening can be indeed extremely helpful.. You have penned a very fine poem Arzoo.. Thank you for sharing.
Each and every line every word are full of deep thought and emotions....loved this one......thank you for sharing :)
'So I raise my hands towards God in prayers'. When all efforts fail, turn to God. Beautiful poem
Extinguishing my inner anger with spirituality.... well said
A sublime piece. I sincerely admire the humble prayer reflected in this simple and sober poem. Top score
Superb! I look and search that inner spark in me....loved this candid expression.
Of my lost Identity! ! But there is hope ahead. With the prayers of the faith. Nice piece of work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, Outstanding poem, from the depth of our pain a spark kindled in form of a Prayer to Almighty.....Very Inspiring poem, Heartfelt.......10++++