Saturday, November 11, 2017

Grandpa Comments

Rating: 4.7

You were a man, who used to hold my hand,
My wounds, my cries, you mend.
Smile on me, you will watch,
Here obstacles are, you teach me to dutch.
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Vishal Kr. Sharma
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Susan Williams 19 September 2020

You were a man, who used to hold my hand, My wounds, my cries, you mend.- - - - - - - - how heartbreakingly wonderful to have had such a man to grandfather you,

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Richard Wlodarski 20 December 2017

A beautiful and heart-felt ode to your grandpa. I could really feel your love for him. And it almost brought tears to my eyes because I never even met my grandfather. Vishal, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 December 2017

Long it's been your mischievous boy being mend, Come back once, You used to mend, again mend mine, Grandpa and grandson, again we together shine......................A touching poem, congrats.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2017

Grandpa and grandson, again both together shine.There is very deep affection between grandfather and grandson. This poem is very neatly drafted interesting, excellent and emotional tribute poem. This touches heart and soul very much. A nice poem is selected as poem of the day in member section. Congratulations! ..10

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Bharati Nayak 20 December 2017

No ride bring smile today, You be the horse, on your back I lay. Step over step you would take me, Come back once, and we play. Children bond quickly with grand parents as they receive unconditional love from them.A poem of tribute to grand parents with lovely memories shared.

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Bharati Nayak 20 December 2017

You were a man, who used to hold my hand, My wounds, my cries, you mend. Smile on me, you will watch, Here obstacles are, you teach me to dutch. The deep bond between a child and his grand parents is so nicely expressed.

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Savita Tyagi 20 December 2017

Beautiful! It is a blessing to have such bond with grandpa. Grandchildren are apple of their eyes. Congratulations for member poem place for this lovely poem.

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Francie Lynch 20 December 2017

The syntax confuses the poem. I'm aware English is not the first language of the poet, and I admire his attempt, but, like I said, confusing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 December 2017

A wonderful poem on a beautiful relationship you have shared with us. Congratulations on member poem of the day!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 December 2017

No power on earth—which included parents and grandparents —should or could separate them and you know of your grand affection for your grandparents and theirs for you.....the most may be infinite.....definitely deserves P.O.D........THANKS FOR SHARING

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2017

Smile today! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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o poetme poety 20 December 2017

LOVELY GRANDPA MUST B HE

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Bill Cantrell 20 December 2017

Wonderful poem, good memories make such pleasant poetry, thank you and congratulations for potd

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Jette Blackstone 20 December 2017

I just love this one. You've captured the true love of grandparent and grandchild. This is such a special relationship. You've made some beautiful images come alive and enhanced even further the concept of such love. Thanks and congrats on poem of the day.

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Siddartha Montik 20 December 2017

Nice Poem of Child-hood Memories.. and love Expressed for Grandpa! ! Thank you for sharing.. and Congratulations for Selected Poem! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 December 2017

Straight from the heart it will certainly bring memory of the times spent with grandpas of the readers. Such a fine tribute. Thanks for sharing and congrats.

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Tom Allport 20 December 2017

a lovely tribute poem that was written from the heart with a wish I think that your bond to him will never depart. Wonderfully written Vishal.

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Rajnish Manga 20 December 2017

There is a very special bond between grandpa and grandson. The poem evokes nostalgic images and goes on to celebrate this bond. Thanks a lot. I love the way you have expressed it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 December 2017

Vishal, congrats for being chosen...10+++

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 November 2017

Yes Grand parents are more than parents today as they teach you love and not money making. Beautiful

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