.. ≫ *my First Cut****(Dark Poem by Eyan Desir
.. ≫ *my First Cut****(Dark
Like a virgin to love
I felt a miracle for the first time
As your presence touched my life
You gave my heart joy it never had
And opened my eyes to a new light
Not knowing love isn't just a pretty face
But what that's lock in a heart
I fell as the victim to a lie
False promise of sweet love
Streams of pain! I now bleed
Many years my heart wasn't red.
thanks for reading
Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire.
June 26th 2009
knowing love isn't just a pretty face....good line. Entitled - First cut then you start with Like a virgin to love -made me curious as what your poem is all about....which i may say a good ingredient in a poem.
great expressions indeed.. Eyen.. you said it well.. what better man to talk of bleeding heart than you.. nice 10++ with lots of love shan
vry nyc poem! ! i really lyked it! ! plx read my poemz to if u hve time n plx cmmnt on them to so i knw u lyked them or nt plz!
you oredy told... complicated but sweet and nice at all well done doctor luwi
this is... undescribable. it really made me think. i'm kinda speechless. love, Heart of Ice
touching.... first cut of the heart.. first love...first heartbreak... nicely written, my friend.. lovelots, Maia
see......... sorry. but, life eh? ? choose virtue.....
Very good poem I understood it right away. I think I reaily felt what you wrote.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 11:47:39 PM # 1.0.0
I really like that! It's a bit complicated for me to read since I'm young, but once I read it a few times I get what it all is saying. Please stop by, and read some of mine if you find time.