I just can't live without you
How are you living without me
I just can't breathe
My emotions are frozen
There's a tightness
In my heart
Grappling with pain
As though someone's
Twisting my heart
Tears fill my eyes
And smile stops at my lips
Missing you is so hurtful
I withdrew into a shell
Solitude fills my emptiness
Your sweet nothing word echoes
And there's nobody to hear my woes
My heart screams for an exit
The pain in my heart seems to exceed
In frustration tears flows down
And a sense of depression descends
I try writing down my thoughts
Which soothes me n calms my nerves
© Aarzoo Mehek
Memories! ! My emotions are frozen; because, true love touches the heart so deep. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This is a very intense write. Emotions are gushing and the reader feels purified in their profundity. It speaks for me too. I can relate. Very cathartic write. And the last verse says a lot about the power of poetry.10
A profound poem on the subject of longing love, you have mastered on this subject, I agree with Nosheen's comment......100+++
In frustration tears flows down and a sense of depression descends I try writing down my thoughts...the poetic expression is intense, poignant and terribly beautiful.
an excellent poem depicting the pangs of separation in love.But this tolerance would increase multiple times the joy of union.
We should all, at some point or other in our lives, realise that keeping emotions locked up in our hearts is unhealthy. Poetry, or any form of art for that, is a great way to relieve ourselves from the feelings within. Beautifully written Arzoo.
A heart-touching poem on separation from love....the feelings of vacuum and pain in the heart.....aptly described in your mesmerizing lines..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Absence of love is a rending thing. Writing is good therapy. I hope your heart finds peace