If You Dont Mind (Through My Eyes) Poem by Unwritten Soul

If You Dont Mind (Through My Eyes)

Rating: 4.2


Take this last seconds
Before its gone forever
Set your sight to look into my eyes
Look deeply not only to be on eyes
but in heart and mind to be last
In this world i am another cast
But life just moved so fast

Through my eyes
Through the key to my inside
A gate to meet my soul in heart
After years, i wonder what you've seen
What you've found in me through them
May you claim color of our past
To color memories later in your life
Find all in very last time,
Through eyes of mine

Like mirror to myself
Everything i've seen through yours is the ocean
Where i see my reflection at the center
Swimming and drowning in the tears
Through your clear oceans
Those tender eyes of yours
But dont let drown me in tears
Because there is no end to eternity
The place for beautiful memory

Though moment will finally be past
But now, find all treasures in my eyes
Because there's too much to say
Too little time we've
So go diving deeper as you could
Claim all hidden words
Take this final seconds
Fix our past to be last
For very last through my eyes
Look deeply not only to be on eyes
but in heart and mind to be last

And if my last breath has passed
I left all my beautiful life
To stay with you
To live in you
From my spoken eyes to your keeping heart
If you dont mind
If you dont mind

Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It just my expression of my emotion that i would like to convey for each person and everyone i love in my whole life, if i am going to die, look my eyes and go deeply, and i hope all my revealing words that failed from my lips will be found through them, through my eyes...my eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Asadullah 02 January 2016

Emotions very nicely expressed, thanks for the share!

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Kavya . 31 December 2015

Because there's too much to say Too little time we've so nicely you have expressed your love to your loved ones - truly said, i always believe in living like there is no tomorrow - so live your fullest today, as too little time we have and too much to say - loved these lines Unwritten Soul _

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

very romantic poem....I read it twice

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015

Love, peace and joy! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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Valsa George 26 December 2015

This plea to everyone you love, to look into your eyes deep and see what is there in your inner heart to read what your lips have failed to utter is quite touching! A poignant write and the unveiling of a loving heart!

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Mj Lemon 06 January 2018

Soul....magnificent! To see the ocean is to witness all the unguarded emotion to spill out. At that moment, we are the most vulnerable. Great truth about depth of emotion in these words of yours, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 September 2017

Set your sight to look into my eyes Look deeply not only to be on eyes but in heart and mind to be last In this world i am another cast But life just moved so fast.... haunting expression with great theme. Philosophically sound. I appreciate this poem for its theme and tenderness. Thank u for sharing.

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Mihaela Pirjol 07 June 2016

I love the tenderness, the gentleness, the honesty of the sentiments, emotionally expressed in this poem that touches the very depths of heart of the reader. I very much enjoyed reading it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 January 2016

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Neela Nath Das 02 January 2016

Soul, your poems always are soaked with deep emotion.Come back with your bouquet of lovely poems.Good wishes for You and your family.

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