Unwritten Soul


In Thousand Miles, Love Still Not Far - Poem by Unwritten Soul

I was in thousand miles
Away and in dream to be free
Before i've learned everything i think i know
Before i've learned i thought i know
But i didnt

I would love you
Though your hair turn to white
I wont stop loving you
Though my love is unseen in heart

I do love you
Though my lips are not telling
But i wont stop loving you
Because all your life is all you're giving

Before i was away in thousand miles
In my thought was a dream to be free
Thinking that many things i know...all
But nothing is what i only know...all

In a distance, miles away
In a silence and your voice far away
I go back of all the past time
When i in different place
Where sometimes i dont understand you
Which some other ways your willing hurt me
When some other days i found your love on me
In a distance, miles away
Understand is finally gain on me
Growing up telling me years the reasons i havent knew

Of the hurt will you bruise my younger me to scar me
To remind me someday of that wrong to be left for right i must stay
The same hurts that i replied at you with my childish cry
The same hurts that now i know is one of the love kinds

My lips still wont tell to all
But I love you
Though your hair turn to white
I would love you
Though wrinkles consumes your beauty
I would still love you
Even your strength rely on me
I am not a kind of lover that tell
Because my love is not by sound
My love is unseen in heart

But i do love you more
Not because of your hair
Or young skin
But i do love you
because you love me
From the beginning
Till my life ending
And because all of what you sacrificing
Through many years of tears
Through fun of few months
I do love you for more
because i love you
because you love me

I can be far in a million miles
But i can smile when i remember your smile
Young is a lesson time
and growing up make understanding fine
...maybe now finally i know more
...maybe forever i dont know all
but i still love you

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

: : : Dedicated to all parents, of course to my parents too: : :

Comments about In Thousand Miles, Love Still Not Far by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/17/2017 9:21:00 AM)


    I can be far in a million miles
    But i can smile when i remember your smile
    Young is a lesson time
    and growing up make understanding fine
    ...maybe now finally i know more
    ...maybe forever i dont know all
    but i still love you... nice theme. There is no matter of distance in love. Thousands and thousands of miles aren't far. It is a beautiful dedication to the parents. Thanks.
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  • Rebecca Navarre (11/25/2016 6:58:00 PM)


    What A Beautifully Loving Poem! ! ! ! ! So Beautifully Written! ! ! ! ! Touching And Heart Felt! ! !
    Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many 10S! ! ! ! !
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  • (8/19/2016 5:39:00 AM)


    no dedication can balance this natural love. somewhere sometimes the presence of this love is also great blessing. very beautiful lines. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2015 8:58:00 PM)


    that could be your mother...very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (12/26/2015 1:24:00 AM)


    I can connect to this very well. The love of and for our parents is indestructible undeminishable by distance, neither by the abyss of death. The love will go on for ever and it lives through in us and in our children an then in theirs. Love is ever increasing in this world and there is no way back... :) (Report) Reply

  • Joby John (12/19/2015 5:11:00 AM)


    Good poem................................................. (Report) Reply

  • Farzad Jahanbani (12/19/2015 3:10:00 AM)


    Nice real lovely poem...
    I hope, God protect them and You
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  • Kavya . (12/17/2015 4:21:00 AM)


    a beautiful dedication to parents who are the pillars of our family. a wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/14/2015 9:48:00 PM)


    Parents love their children unconditionally. When children ae young, they may not be able to understand the vastness of their love, but as they grow older by and by, they begin to realize the depth and width of their love and they reciprocate it. Children love their parents till the end of time and they keep the love in their hearts even though they may not always express it through words or actions! A beautiful poem of felial gratitude! (Report) Reply (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/12/2015 5:18:00 AM)


    'I would love you though your hair turn to white' is a beautiful line. Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Govinda Rimal (12/12/2015 2:22:00 AM)


    Thank you.. my heart beat stopped for a moment after reading your poem... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/9/2015 3:52:00 AM)


    I won't stop loving you. Nice work with the muse of true love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/7/2015 7:39:00 AM)


    Love will remain in your heart whenever you are. Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/6/2015 10:15:00 AM)


    Unconditional love with fantastic lines....
    My lips still wont tell to all
    But I love you
    Though your hair turn to white
    I would love you
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  • Shakil Ahmed (12/6/2015 10:07:00 AM)


    nice dedication, you have painted your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, August 19, 2016


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