As the leaves swayed by the wind hands
My feeling strongly catch secret sense
There was something in the wind
Calling for the rain...to fall
Wonderful sky with colors change
Sometimes cloudy with pain
Drain all in tearful rain
But now listen...
Listen to the rain
do you listen to the rain?
it tells a story...
'When u meet a friend
Appreciate them, love them
Like me love to earth...
We are far apart but
We remember each other
Either in joy or hard
We remain together'
The last drop
The rain stopped,
There was a rainbow drawn
Proudly high in the blue sky
Expressing a nice feeling
Defined by the rain and earth
Of the true friendship
Everytime the wind kiss on my face
It reminds me to the rain
Evertime the wind touching my hair
Feeling lucky budding in my vein
This is just a nice feeling
Possibly the same way
like earth and rain felt
and this is...
this is because of u my friend
We did creating our own rainbow
Forever drawn in our hearts
cant be seen but can be felt
Safe in our red heart
'when u meet a friend
appreciate them, love them
like me love to earth...
we are far apart but
we remember each other'
...a true word from rain
This memory will remain
Oh, this touched my soul. Shuddering from the pain of a breakup. Crying from loss. But, one shouldn't cry because it's over, one should smile because it happened...
I loved your imagery, pictures were just appearing in my head right and left. Very beautiful!
It's so touching and a dramatic sensitive one, realy enjoyed reading it :)
Rain pirouetted very well in the potholes of life, pitter-pattered in the minds of readers-who does not want rain? Men always longs for monsoon and only women remain snowy cold hard-iced smoky winter...enjoyed..
The last drop The rain stopped, There was a rainbow drawn Proudly high in the blue sky Expressing a nice feeling Defined by the rain and earth Of the true friendship...../// romantically described; beautifully penned, I enjoyed here on the ground of memory on the lap of heart the drop of rain will remind your letter which you gave in springtime by the course of time I opened in rainy season as if the rain drop made me wet with your togetherness.........o dear
'when u meet a friend appreciate them, love them like me love to earth... we are far apart but we remember each other' ...a true word from rain This memory will remain..........this is what rain tells us through your pen. Though the earth and rain are far apart yet their love is true and deep. They remember each other. Nice imaginary. A beautiful metaphorical poem shared amazingly.10
A beautifully written poem with great imagery and inspired lines!
Wonderful poem and so beautifully written, good friends are the lifeblood of a good life lived.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So beautiful. The rain is beautiful, and so symbolic. I love the humanity you express in your poetry, it's so pure and beautiful.