Melancholic Windy Day Poem by Unwritten Soul

Melancholic Windy Day

Rating: 4.1


On the grass, at the autumn scene
Of night, your chest, pillow to sleep
Your heavy breath tamer than subtle wind
And the sun in your heart changed to be the moon maybe
And that's why your skin is cold as it shouldn't be
I seek to hear your words that sound lovely
Sipping your words is like melody infused honey
I may smile as foolishly for I hear nothing,
But it could be just an illusion remedy to me
I'm not crying, I am not crying, I'm just crying
While fingers of mine touching your pale skin
On your brows now dry and crisp like branches on the tree
I do hear something, finally
All that I hear from you, only the silence, the loudest melody
You stare at the stars, with your closed eyes
I stare at your eyes tracing the constellation of glory
Walking back, traveling time to our past journey
On your wide stomach like the marigold field I, place my head
To revive summer on your now winter skin, cold body
Then I stand up above thee
To leave you alone in your deep sleep
While I reviving past memories
of past to now, the illusion feels o real, vividly
And that's how a bye is always a silent melancholy
God, My Almighty Lord, I pray to keep this soul under your blessing
With love and care from me

Good night my dear, meet you later, in another world
yes dear in another world when you wake up I will be there
Somewhere we are not familiar
but eternal

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this instantly while i receiving so many news from my friends and people around that...some of my close people lost their beloved friends and family and it also happened to myself too at the same time which really surprising me, losing few friends at almost at the same time is really hard to accept and so devastating especially when i know that they just have a chance to rebuild their life after so many obstacle they had in their life...so many dreams and nice things ahead in their plan then suddenly their gone. I hope God with your and your family because its not easy for them to accept this, and continue the struggle. Somehow i know God is fair so i leave to Him to keep the flying Souls somewhere better than here. God bless my friends!

Since these sad things happened in October, i just use the autumn background while i try to reconnect the memories with them intimately since they are far away, i just imagine that i was there to say goodbye. so thats it...i just wrote these to honour all people that dear to me that are now taking different journey or life, immortal one! .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2018

Part - 1 I know you have written this melancholic windy day poem so touchingly in lieu of your close friends who lost their beloved friends and family and it also happened to yourself too at the same time which really surprising you, losing few friends at almost at the same time is really hard to accept and so devastating especially when you know that they just have a chance to rebuild their life after so many obstacle they had in their life...so many dreams and nice

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2018

Part - 2 things ahead in their plan then suddenly their gone. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.10

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Hans Vr 19 October 2018

Soulful and deep expression of love and sorrow; the verses weigh on the heart but they are penned so beautifully that the melancholic winds seem to take away some of the grief on a journey to heaven leaving behind a dose of grace and gratefulness for wonderful moments of togetherness gone by.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 February 2020

A heart touching poem, the poet felt and nicely described his feelings.

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Rebecca Navarre 03 January 2019

Deeply beautiful and deeply heart moving! .. Beautiful sentiments! .. My sympathies, very difficult times! .. Ever so beautiful to write! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2018

Good night my dear, meet you later, in another world yes dear in another world when you wake up I will be there Somewhere we are not familiar but eternal.....so touching A beautiful poem on empathy nicely executed.

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Muhammad Ali 24 November 2018

Hmmm. Life and all its tools, organic and inorganic, are they obstacles or illusions! And the other world... The real and unseen. And love and the acceptance of each flower or thorn is ideal to live here. Nice poem.

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Mj Lemon 01 November 2018

In your words, Soul, is a tremendous empathy. You deal with the greatest of losses, with profound sensitivity. This is a simply amazing work.

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