Unwritten Soul


Metamorphosis/Unchanged - Poem by Unwritten Soul

when the world keep spinning
when the days keep changing

everything gonna be changed
day to night
winter to autumn

when the light become dark
when the bud start blooming

everything will be different
but my friend...
there are something that never changed
and its remain unchanged...

our friendship,
loyalty,
and faith
these things never been changed
even when the world keep spinning
or when days keep changing

and the day we become older and worse,
our friendship become wiser and greater


Comments about Metamorphosis/Unchanged by Unwritten Soul

  • (3/8/2018 6:46:00 PM)


    Not many can say such a marvelous thing.
    Unique poetry beautifully expressed!
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    Unwritten Soul (3/10/2018 6:22:00 AM)

    you are such a deep thinker and a good writer, you also too kind to say this comment for me, you made it sounds nice..but i was thinking why you remove all your poems, you know you have great observations and words of truth in poetry diary, you should keep it here..we can learn from you as well dear Sir

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  • (12/16/2017 11:12:00 PM)


    Wow! ! ! ! ! Again Just Swept Away By
    How Beautiful Of Feel In The Words
    You So Say! ! ! ! ! Spoken So Beautifully Poetic! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
    Ever So Very Very Many Endless...1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2017 9:51:00 PM)


    Ofcourse there is metamorphosis in every moment in this cosmos. The earth is spinning and day is changing to night and vice versa. The seasons are changing. Buds are going to be changed to flowers. But there is something that never be changed is friendship. It is on loyalty and faith. Woderfully crafted and amazingly shared. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2017 9:35:00 PM)


    A great life lesson, Soul. You made think that some things change so much, they actually change right back to the way they were. The seasons remind me of renewal and restoration. A wonderful work, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (12/17/2012 9:57:00 AM)


    This is one of the few poems you read. In the end you feel happy... this is something very difficult to achieve... (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2011 3:38:00 AM)


    Hello! Hello! Fellow poet, Dearest Soul i am in the seventh heaven that I writing my poem with poets like you - (Unwritten soul) , Vippin's, Amith Ray, Crimson Love are the star poets whose poetry impressed me hence i look for inspiration from you..........
    yet there is another poetess Jacqui broad who is my heart-mate.......

    'and the day we become older and worse,
    our friendship become wiser and greater'

    However, this poem of yours is special as it is on hot topic FRIENDSHIP. I usher all the above energetic poets to write about nature as the new is approaching.... let us all start the age of Romanticism.
    My special honest invitation to you - unwritten soul I am longing to see out and out nature poem from you... sorry to ask but i love your poems...
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  • (12/3/2011 3:34:00 AM)


    Hello! Hello! Fellow poet, Dearest Soul i am in the seventh heaven that I writing my poem with poets like you - (Unwritten soul) , Vippin's, Amith Ray, Crimson Love are the poets whom i love and look for inspiration...........

    yet there is another poetess Jacqui broad who is my heart-mate........however, this poem of yours is special as it is on hot topic FRIENDSHIP. I usher all the above energetic poets to write about nature as the new is approaching.... let us all start the age of Romanticism.

    'and the day we become older and worse,
    our friendship become wiser and greater'

    My special honest invitation to you - unwritten soul I am longing to see out and out nature poem from you... sorry to ask but i love your poems...
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/30/2011 7:42:00 AM)


    Great poem my friend as always. I like
    The last four lines. Great words of wisdom.
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  • (5/1/2011 6:11:00 PM)


    great poem, love the concept.

    check out some of mine, i've just started writing.
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  • (7/12/2010 8:39:00 AM)


    when the light become dark
    when the bud start blooming

    your eye catches the changes I love to watch and remember within the soul
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  • (7/4/2010 4:16:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem with a perfect theme..Great work (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2010 10:05:00 AM)


    Changing from this to that! Cleverly written poem. Well done.; D
    Read, Significant, on, metamorphosis.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2010 10:07:00 PM)


    when the world keep spinning
    when the days keep changing

    everything gonna be changed
    day to night
    winter to autumn.yes it needs change and everything has to bechanged... nice one....10
    read mine...child.... anywhere, mary to marry
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 2, 2011


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