Outlook Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Outlook

Rating: 5.0


Time becomes a tired child
In this workshop of tiny life

Now the paths greenery and withering
Grown-up more but in dwarfs outlook

At the old bank of searching
Nothing is disclosed by digging the truth

Tired and tired the distinction
Full hands of years now tired roots

On the bud of soil, no one will bloom
The fire of eyes in distinguishing puffs

Belief, lonely wandering clouds
Under the soil seeking the final version of the union

Truth! Nothing is true, translucent but transient
What I see- interludes of drama


10.08.2020 Chattogram

Tuesday, August 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: truth,world conflicts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 11 August 2020

Profound poem. Life is a mirage. It is like holding sand the more we try to tighten the grip the quickly it falls apart. Past is the dust left behind it will only makes our hands dirty. Thought Provoking poem 100++

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Anjandev Roy 12 August 2020

Glorious write.......thank u......anjandev roy.

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Sachidananda Panda 11 August 2020

" What I see- interludes of drama" what an in depth ending... that confines the entire poem in just one statement... Beautiful...!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 August 2020

An astute observation on what is prevailing in life nowadays. Yes, truth is translucent but transient and can be twisted. A very perceptive write well crafted.

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Valsa George 11 August 2020

Time becomes tired child In this workshop of tiny life.............! A powerful and poignant opening! Time and life are equally tired! It is a powerful mirroring of the times when Covid and natural disasters are destroying the zest for living and everyone has tired eyes and diminishing hopes!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Drama! ! ! Growing up! Facing the muse of time. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 August 2020

Wonderful poem! Thought provoking and so true.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

Truth! Nothing is true, translucent but transient What I see- interludes of drama. The message you wish to tell us, has been brought by this gorgeous write! Indeed, nothing is true! Absolutely right! You see reality. Your eyes don't deceive you! Eachn time I visit your poem site, you've created better poems, Mahtab. This is my way of telling you that you write brilliant poems, absolutely! A 10+++++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 August 2020

Great impressive metaphorical poem, on time and life. Kudos for how you express superbly.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 August 2020

A well crafted piece. Simply superb......10++

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