Satan was waiting
Gleefully on the rails
At the end of the tunnel face
Unaware the driver stopped the train
Abruptly pulled the brakes
For want of Master’s
Signal green…
Lucky passengers! Are they? Can the Driver find out Satan's wait before the Green light burns? So many questions arise..........Truly a great poem; a poem that makes the readers think and gives rise to so many questions and end-options....This is what Ershad Muzamdar calls as a great poem.....
wonder why death has to be so dramatic sometimes...accidents and natural calamities make us question god...in this case after deputing satan god seems to have changed his mind...a story well told in just a few lines...great craft sir..10
Inadvertently, a devastation by devil avoided Haven’t we come across many such occasions? ? Your presentation of such a graceful incident Took my heart away to a land of intrepid, by fate. Let me by virtue of being a technocrat Mention a wit with which I compare SATAN – in computer terms… Security Administrator Tool for Analyzing Networks Not a devil…but Driver like the one in your poem May fail his intensions…and Network will fail… for sure....; -))
Kesav, this is so simple but deep and vivid idea well done poet luwi
Fortunately, there was no accident, I suppose at the end of the tunnel.
I enjoy thought prevocing poems... good write Kesav Regards Alf
beware - beware - beware - that's what this verses means.....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a clever symbolic poem shared...well conceived thoughts...........10+++++