fighting to escape darkness
shadows reel me back in
echoing taunts of weakness
presenting me with a knife
bending to the command
a slave to the dagger in hand
as i drag it across my skin
bringing forth crimson release
blood flows from my veins
dropping the blade in shame
deafening silence surrounds
shadows retreating to corners
watching with unforgiving eyes
as darkness consumes again
Once again another truly great poem about, real pain, and a dark side that not many people ever see or feel. A fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, dream world.
This is a very dark yet beautiful poem. I found every line immaculate...... Truly amazing. :)
I can feel the blood in my hand, your words so real and cool...a write that i can say a beautiful pain to read but yeah it pain to endure hahaha..i mean this is cool write :) , keep showing us your cool works_Unwritten Soul
nice wording, perhaps i can realy feel the deepening emotions here
This is an amazing 'write 'SG'! ! Very deep, dark, yet incredibly written! Nice! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is a darkness that lives within us all, for without darkness, light cannot exist... I hope you find the light... There is a beautiful agony about this poem... I love it...