Thoughts And Me Poem by Muhammad Ali

Five steps to live a life. The last step says all.

these lines are pretty interesting: I become bore, so long being 'me' If I were a flower, a star... or a tree! ! ..............but try bored, not bore this is my favorite line of the poem: We are the waves, till shore we survive......thanks for sharing. it seems it has been a few years since you last submitted a poem. bri :)

like waves certainly we are........yet our mental makeup is the truth of every thing.....surrendering him will ease.......I like the last lines of this poem.....and the flow and thought are superb.......

Your think tank has flowed with the waves... very nice indeed ++++10 for me regards

Last two lines are superb....excellent piece of work

The counting is an anchor...as we give in to it, we focus and our vision becomes clearer...A terrific poem, Ali.

A thought provoking poem......................................................

I like the counting- adds a distinctive touch to the piece. Well-penned!

Very profound piece of work. Written with flair n poetic intuition. Filled with wisdom. Full marks.

a different and quite original write up! ! ! ! ! !