Let's watch the sea
Where the dolphins play
As the moon echoes its arrival
The sun is going down
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Very moving, LeeAnn. The end arrives carrying a nice note of serenity.
Filled with such beautiful emotion and imagery that reaches to the readers heart! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++
In such a mood I am reading your heart touching poem, about the sea and about bittersweet love, my only reaction was WOW! Your scintillating sad poem touched my inside heart deepest.5 Stars TOP Score LeeAnn!
TWO: the french guards led the cute lovely dolphin to the ocean again, but too late, it had become too weak and died on the way back, this is the second time in a very short time, the previous one was in our own dutch waters, same ending
Dear LeeAnn, we are just informed here in Europe that the dolphin which had taken the wrong course, instead into the sea but to the river of France, which is of course dirty water,
A memorable poem, with precious images and metaphors, with the sea as background and deepest fellings, so deeply and poetically expressed. A poem with such natural flow it just carries you away in a most magical way.
A beautiful picture painted around...Loved the way you wrote it. Full *****
what beautiful and haunting words about dolphins swimming in the ocean and in our memories--5 stars
I love this beautiful, bittersweet poem about parting, LeeAnn. It is in my List.
As I'm reading this tender bittersweet poem, I'm looking at a glass figurine of a dolphin that's on my desk. Both the poem and the figurine make me yearn for their natural habitat. I've always wanted to swim with them! As always, beautiful poetry in motion, LeeAnn!
Very inspiring write with beautiful expression...like it