Saturday, August 13, 2022

Watching The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let's watch the sea
Where the dolphins play
As the moon echoes its arrival
The sun is going down
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Indira Renganathan 19 September 2022

Very inspiring write with beautiful expression...like it

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M.J. Lemon 23 August 2022

Very moving, LeeAnn. The end arrives carrying a nice note of serenity.

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Yes, dear Lee the parting

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Rebecca Navarre 16 August 2022

Filled with such beautiful emotion and imagery that reaches to the readers heart! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2022

In such a mood I am reading your heart touching poem, about the sea and about bittersweet love, my only reaction was WOW! Your scintillating sad poem touched my inside heart deepest.5 Stars TOP Score LeeAnn!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2022

TWO: the french guards led the cute lovely dolphin to the ocean again, but too late, it had become too weak and died on the way back, this is the second time in a very short time, the previous one was in our own dutch waters, same ending

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2022

Dear LeeAnn, we are just informed here in Europe that the dolphin which had taken the wrong course, instead into the sea but to the river of France, which is of course dirty water,

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Sandra Feldman 15 August 2022

A memorable poem, with precious images and metaphors, with the sea as background and deepest fellings, so deeply and poetically expressed. A poem with such natural flow it just carries you away in a most magical way.

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M. Asim Nehal 15 August 2022

A beautiful picture painted around...Loved the way you wrote it. Full *****

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Nabakishore Dash 14 August 2022

Beautifully penned Dear LeeAnn.

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Anjandev Roy 14 August 2022

This is an amazing piece.....thank u, dear poetess...

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Susan Williams 14 August 2022

what beautiful and haunting words about dolphins swimming in the ocean and in our memories--5 stars

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 August 2022

I love this beautiful, bittersweet poem about parting, LeeAnn. It is in my List.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 August 2022

As I'm reading this tender bittersweet poem, I'm looking at a glass figurine of a dolphin that's on my desk. Both the poem and the figurine make me yearn for their natural habitat. I've always wanted to swim with them! As always, beautiful poetry in motion, LeeAnn!

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 August 2022

Beautiful LeeAnn x Thank you for sharing x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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