We As A Whole Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

We As A Whole

Rating: 4.8


We as a whole need our very own position.
A spot to stay in, a spot to re-evaluate about existence
And a spot to escape unpleasant climates.
That spot ought not be in the vicinity of others but inside oneself.
The best spot to look for comfort is directly inside us.
So let us look for that lost safe place inside us.


© Aarzoo Mehek

We As A Whole
Thursday, September 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: realisation,self help
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 24 September 2020

Great poem. Yeah each person needs lonely moments away from the comments where you cant lie to yourself like poetry book on the shelf.

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Sharad Bhatia 24 September 2020

It is this " relaxed that gives us mental peace and full power to think. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem

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Varsha M 24 September 2020

Yes internal loci of control is the best motivator. Best guide and best healer. Thought provoking poetry. Thank-you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2022

A motivational piece of work! Appreciated...Top score! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2020

The poem resonates the great words of Krishna, in The Holy Bhagawat Gita: Uddharet aatman aatmanam Na aatmanam avasadayet Aatmasya hi aatmano bandhur- Aatmaiva ripuratmanaa.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 October 2020

The best spot to look for comfort is directly inside us. So let us look for that lost safe place inside us. ....yeah; exactly.......

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 September 2020

Beautiful inner sanctum - where all is love and pure. All the happiness lies in this innermost core of our being. Wonderful poem, dear Arzoo.....Thank you so much. Stay blessed.....5 Stars

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2020

The spot to stay in! ! ! ! ! Being very comfortable. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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