When You'Ll Be Away I'Ll Remember This Comments

You are a firm romantic!

Very well written.... Can really feel the passion, keep up the great work.

very feeling poem written with love in heart full of love

Great passion, this poem would make a beautiful love song and it would be a number one hit! Wonderful rhythm and flow, love it!

now that is a really romantic piece...good work

You always meant to be a romantic poet, because the lines will always speak in the best when you make it...you are a great writer my friend Asif_Soul

From the title to the last line it is a wonderful love poem.

Beautiful poem, short sweet and to the point I like it.

Romantic and funny - the last line Eat me baby eat me please like hotcake It's good though!

Simple but romantic.

Hope your love likes this romantic beauteous write with rhyme and rhythm.

Perfectly suiting the last moment you share when she is going away for a while

Wow.. Its very beautiful... I wish to be the major of your poem...

oh my god..what a poem..outstanding..mind boggling rhyme.. i am going to gift it to my girlfriend..

very romantic and gentle...........love it