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Who I Really Am! !

Rating: 4.4

It's preety crazy how one brush of make up, can change the way people see you
How a curl in your hair, could make someone think you have the perfect life
How a smile could make other's imagine that everything is ok.......

But what about when the makeup is washed away? ? ?
When the curls in your hair die down? ? ?
When that smile turns into a frown? ?
What about the real you, that you've tried so hard for no one to see
The broken hearted girl that was hiding underneath? ?

Was she really that bad of a person to cover up
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Jason Mcgookin 31 August 2009

i like this poem a lot of thought went into it and also alot of you. i enjoyed it

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Ken E Hall 08 July 2009

Everyone is beautiful it is what the holder thinks of what the beholder thinks of the holder... Now you have grown vwalla you are a beauty.... nice poem ++++++10 regards

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beautiful and truthful. it helped u grow and i'm happy for you! ! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 July 2009

thoughtful compact composition! finely penned! 10+

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Shekhar Joshi 02 July 2009

i liked most of the poem........it had a great message and was written beautifully......but somehow i couldn't get along with the fourth para.......it somehow conflicts with my ideology............... great write though........ ;)

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2009

Honesty is the best policy in one's self and you have presented yourself admirable to the world plus a smile is your own tonic luved the poem ++++10 regards uavanice1

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flariza bazu 26 June 2009

you are love your true self is showing up

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

You look beautiful your poem makes you sound like a sweet girl lol good write 10 points

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James Mclain 22 June 2009

What a difference the smile can bring..iip..now sing..woman..sing..

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