O green forests!
save our souls
O young maidens!
cherish our days
O joyful children!
brighten our spirits
O colorful garden!
strengthen our hearts
O gentle fathers!
widen our horizons
O caring mothers!
sweeten our dreams
O calm seas!
spread your smiles
O prosperous skies!
send your tenderness
you've been very fond of a serene cloud nine
can an odd agenda be trusted in an age of famine?
however you may try hard to deny a forbidden offspring
love and nature are going together to enter a hollow building?
sometime a sunrise also need to take a rest
in an anniversary of charming harvest
whenever a heart's light deplored
can a waterfall be explored?
half soul transcends to moon
vicious desire sleeps at noon
with all strength rainbows glow
why all pleasures have to bow?
stay on these roads, my friends
whatever it may happens
just look back in tender
nothing can force lover
Debussy String Quartet's harmonies
senses our deepest feelings
O eternal beloved!
say our love
Janacek String Quartet's melodies
touches our deepest hopes
O eternal beloved!
bring our love
Schumann String Quartet's tunes
holds our deepest wishes
O eternal beloved!
shine our love
Ravel String Quartet's rhythms
hugs our deepest souls
O eternal beloved!
spread our love
(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Indira Babbellapati)
Great poem, but I believe the eighth stanza or paragraphed section down might need a little more polishing. Like to the 'When ever it should Happen' should be changed to happen. God bless us all-MJG.
A many faceted poem which every time presents somthing new. A message of love and optimism.
i believe the quartet says it all, along with the mother, father, children, and maidens all rejoicing in this love. gr8t write
I like the blending of styles - it certainly adds colour and music to the poem...10
i'm honoured, my friend...the irony is i'm absolutely non-musical!
A well written poem, my friend. A pleasure to read. Thanks Richard
Well written and straight from the heart in a style that is yours alone!
You have spoken like only you can, hope to hear more, so we can drink of the fountain of your poetry. Dreamgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Definitely a sense of musicality in your work. Nice write!