Are We A Born Rebel? Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Are We A Born Rebel?

Rating: 4.9


We come up against laws
That annoy us immensely
The rules are still just the rules
But we hate to be told what to do

Even when we can’t
Make up our mind
We don’t want someone else
To do it for us

They don’t bother us
Until we feel inclined to break them
We are a bit of a born rebel
Will we find a way to sort out a problem?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 15 November 2008

we should always find a way to sort and fix our problems...nice composition.

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hidden poet 17 November 2008

i love the stanza that says that even when we cant make up our mind we dont want someone else to do it for us. its so true

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 17 November 2008

another good write by you! keep it up!

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Yasser Koor 18 November 2008

i like this poem especially when u said: Even when we can’t Make up our mind We don’t want someone else To do it for us good work

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Hana K 21 November 2008

Sometimes listening have a good result

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 May 2009

I have trouble with authority.

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 February 2009

nice concepts... clever write.... honest words....

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Asia Joseph 13 January 2009

I do like it +10.........................thanks for sharing

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Naruto is my fav. just for that.. A 10!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 November 2008

The rebel just needs his cause, look in the mirror whats yours... Andrew 10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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