Unwritten Soul

Bridge To Our Hearts - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Two hearts of different bodies
Separated more by broken one
Silence may amplify the distance
Hiding the truth and avoiding heal
We cant denying how it feel
When we still remember to forget
It will remain unremoved
Perhaps you forget our memory?
Too much sorry
You believe silence build for thinking
Restless about silence is waiting
Emotions play hate to love
Truly never love to hate
It just me, you and time

Ground and sky in distance far
Will be separated always in a space
Still the cloud and rain can be a love language
As same for sun and star from in touch
But stars inspired me at night sun warms everyday

Time to revise you and me
Friend is not about hating
Friend is all about loving
Break the silence in us
Of two separated hearts
Link by the bridge
And loves walk in
Exchanged in our hearts

Poet's Notes about The Poem

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New idea but not be included..should i? ?

Bridge is important to connect two parts,
Broader soul bridge will connect for someone between two hearts
Be a way for a soul to walk and visit another in place called heart
But when communication was stopped, left as abandoned yard
So keep manage to keep bride stronger even time goes hard
Remember, a bridge is a door of our hearts
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Comments about Bridge To Our Hearts by Unwritten Soul

  • Ramesh Rai (8/3/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Friend is not about hating
    Friend is all about loving
    So break the silence
    Lets break the wall
    Start build the bridge
    To link our hearts
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/19/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Beautiful write.. Good message. Build the bridge to link our hearts.. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    lovely poem, lovely thoughts, it is so important to keep on building bridges. (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    You're quite a poetic architect, Soul; all your work is a bridge to our hearts!
    Impressive, my friend.
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  • (1/5/2013 8:37:00 PM)

    Wow! Powerful! build the bridge to link our hearts.... amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (11/14/2012 9:46:00 PM)

    very nice imagery. Your I think, has broken the silence. Awesome. (Report) Reply

  • (9/4/2012 4:49:00 AM)

    Could not think of a better way to build a bridge between hearts for love and friendship lovely thoughts...nice feelings...regards (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2012 7:11:00 PM)

    Friendship is so important. Let the heart be the bridge that reaches new friends. Love the imagery. A beautiful poem, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Sharad Juneja (4/18/2012 5:10:00 AM)

    a very nice wirting..... the bridge.....after the construction i would like to stand with u thr ;) (Report) Reply

  • Aqeb Benazir (7/31/2011 10:42:00 AM)

    I really appreciate the msg u conveyed, one of the important qualities and aspects of life expressed. great piece of art this is! ! keep it up! This is actually a Written Soul; -p (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2011 3:38:00 PM)

    building bridges are so important, lovely write, my friend, just lovely (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (12/31/2010 9:03:00 AM)

    A good didatic poem on the 'bridging'force.Nice. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2010 2:44:00 PM)

    Your keen usage of metaphor illuminates this work like the sun in the sky. A bridge is an important link that can build close proximity to our destinations and hopes. Although separate...hearts can be joined by the works and efforts of love :)
    Keep up the good work! ...thanks for sharing...a soul filled poem!
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  • (7/28/2010 3:13:00 PM)

    ‘so break the silence
    lets break the wall’ ~ Silence is the killer the ripper waller…nicely dictioned…every thing can get apart in silence but not Love…silence is lethal…so come closer and stop closure… thanks for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    PS Break walling bring wallowing [ecstatic with joy] lol
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  • (7/22/2010 8:59:00 AM)

    lets break the wall
    start build the bridge
    to link our hearts

    beautiful lines, i also sometimes talk with stars, do you hear their answers?
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  • (7/7/2010 9:56:00 PM)

    very well written!
    also have to agree about the last line, loved it.

    keep writting (:
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  • (7/7/2010 10:32:00 AM)

    Loved the positive end to this poem, last stanza summed it up well. Lovely read! ; D (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (3/6/2010 10:10:00 PM)

    Well worded. Oh for a bridge that would join hearts. I really like this poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 6, 2013

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