crescent moon hangs in nightmares
swords were charmed to defy
empty hearts turn to dust
vanished in disguise
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Beautiful images to describe a friend. Well done my friend! a 10
a wonderful dedication for our dear Obinna, a poem-comment, very well written.............
you compounded all God's creation and created a supreme composition out of these. And because of this piece you lit up the entire universe...cheers.
the wonder of wisdom of priceless value of love lives in this return... such beautiful words happen only in the most alluring power of the soul... a very beautiful and fantastic poem...God bless...a 10 +
Oh, actually i think this one is the best :) thanks for the invitation...
Well, well, what a surprise for me, and is such a beautiful one, Ahmad. Thanks.
The English portion is fine but the mid verse I couldn't get. It will be good if you translate the non English parts for others, to get the feel of your write.
Except on stanza in a foreign language all others are fine.
a rollercoaster ride of highs and lows..well penned with wonderful expressions
another nice symbolic footnote full of emotional meaning! Thanks For Sharing/