Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Footnote 3 Comments

Rating: 5.0

crescent moon hangs in nightmares
swords were charmed to defy
empty hearts turn to dust
vanished in disguise
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

another nice symbolic footnote full of emotional meaning! Thanks For Sharing/

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 13 October 2009

Beautiful images to describe a friend. Well done my friend! a 10

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

Excellent dedication yet again.

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Louis Rams 09 October 2009

very well written and with foresight of another poet.

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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

a wonderful dedication for our dear Obinna, a poem-comment, very well written.............

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2009

Beautiful poem for Obinna, well versed 10 Lynda xx

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Noel Horlanda 09 October 2009

you compounded all God's creation and created a supreme composition out of these. And because of this piece you lit up the entire universe...cheers.

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Antonio Liao 08 October 2009

the wonder of wisdom of priceless value of love lives in this return... such beautiful words happen only in the most alluring power of the soul... a very beautiful and fantastic poem...God bless...a 10 +

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 07 October 2009

Bewitching enchanted verses.10.

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The Lost.. 07 October 2009

Oh, actually i think this one is the best :) thanks for the invitation...

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Obinna Eruchie 07 October 2009

Well, well, what a surprise for me, and is such a beautiful one, Ahmad. Thanks.

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Kranthi Pothineni 07 October 2009

The English portion is fine but the mid verse I couldn't get. It will be good if you translate the non English parts for others, to get the feel of your write.

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Lynn Glover 07 October 2009

A good write for Obinna, Lynn

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 07 October 2009

The English and French portions are well-composed.

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

nice expressed cogitation for a friend....

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 October 2009

Except on stanza in a foreign language all others are fine.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 October 2009

A slippery road for sure

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Vinod Kumar 07 October 2009

Lovely like an ancient ballad, thanks for sharing.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 October 2009

All three pieces are lovely.

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Chitra - 07 October 2009

a rollercoaster ride of highs and lows..well penned with wonderful expressions

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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