In Memories With You (The End) Poem by Unwritten Soul

In Memories With You (The End)

Rating: 4.4


Revisiting our past days
Holding time together
The album of memories says...
Beautiful pieces to remember
Heavenly fun and laughter
Love how we stay this way

Sunshine of the last summer
Bending time bringing serenity
Touching my hand for a first write
I'm lost in the warmth of your soul
'Listen to the rain' we made
My lips say that never to fade

Standing in a corner of the year
Bring back all past of older me
Be with you and open to see
Painting life by hand again
Deeper color immortalize me
Brushing smile in child wonderland
Wish i still there but we can't

Holding my soul tight
You listen to my first ballad
Either good or bad u never say it wrong
Closer and closer, make me strong
O September full of bonds

Our days flew drifted by the wind
Time flows like the November rain
Counting without missing a date
Three hundred sixty five days we holding on
Within the full heart of 12months not even long
Nothing went wrong but now we done

Cold winter always a sad witness
We end up in 31st December
Six feet under the white snow
Preserve memories in ice
Denying that was our last day
In memory it keeps lasting
Here in December
Never meant say for leaving
Something was missing
And I missing you already
Before say a goodbye
New years, ....
Won’t be...Never be...
The same like you
Now i walking out my life
With a full memories
Walking ahead with same steps
Along with memories

Leaving u 2010 for 2011
But something still alive
The memories with you
I just cant stop thinking
Because i am
In memories with you

-THE END-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Memories though are short-lived...they add to life.....you taught this once again.Another excellent piece to explore.

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Kiran Sam 21 June 2011

Enjoyed it, like ur many other poems of romantic genre.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 February 2011

beautifully refective...beautifully romantic...beautiful painting on a solid canvas

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 January 2011

But something still alive The memories with you.. Fantastic writing with so many oft quoted lines within it, it will perhaps give fire to the poet also to live loudly after finishing 2011,12.........to its extreme. As a reader we get the force of living together inside a society, inside a home, inside an earth also. Thank you the soul, try to write yourself more and more with the love and passions of life. Regards, pranab 10++

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Nimal Dunuhinga 23 January 2011

A beautiful canvas of an unwritten soul, bittersweet memories in its true colours and it's already framed in our hearts!

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Dev Anand 15 November 2018

The memories with you I just cant stop thinking Because i am In memories with you...how can i ever forget you and your love., a fine romantic and love poem. thank u dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

It is a beautiful poem on memories having stunning expression and nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Memories! With the muse of our past days. Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

hmmmmm...I was thinking of something then those numbers hehehheehe

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2013

a beautiful write in memories of you. ending the year

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