Unwritten Soul

Last Word - Poem by Unwritten Soul

How colorful prism is
The last color we'll see is black
To be ever-last in a long deep sleep
And last sound to be heard is silent
Where all melodies and noises going to rest
We know last thing to own is never gold
But what remain for us is in our own
Heart, the chest for a soul
And the last word to say
Is only a beautiful goodbye
It may hurt ears to hear
But do know
Whatever comes, at last
Silent will replace
And black will cover your face
Just what we stay to perceive later
It could be all...all but remain in heart only
Here now our souls writing life history
Of long years, colorful and melody
That someday may also come in ugly and noisy
But someday be ended in black and stay silently
Heart will endure all before end the world
To be lasting in a very last word
To say, to hear
A beautiful Goodbye
Burying in eternity
Prism color in a long dream

Every thing start with something
Even a something is a beginning
When it has a beginning it must be ending
End will be last...and it can be everlast

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A random write that chaining word of last,
either it just to be last one (end) or to be last one (forever)

a last thing in order sometime be everlasting in memory...

Comments about Last Word by Unwritten Soul

  • (11/6/2017 5:51:00 PM)

    A last, final goodbye. Soul, this makes me think of eternity of existence, but an eternity apart. When all fades away, and the passion slips by, it is always possible to exist. But all things once meaningful have slipped away, perhaps into obscurity forever. What remains of life? Terrific verse, Soul. (Report) Reply

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  • Christopher Tye (7/25/2016 6:15:00 AM)

    Great work as always, remember the last can also be the first. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/2/2016 7:29:00 AM)

    It may hurt ears to hear! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Ebi Robert (12/19/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    nice, keep it up....................... (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    The last colour will be black
    The last sound will be silent
    The lasting word will be Good bye
    Everlasting is ending.
    Beautiful write from your pen.
    Loved reading your poems. You always come up with something different.
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  • Dinesh Nair (11/10/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    Right perception has got powerful presentation and the effect is tremendous. A good sharing Soul.. (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (11/1/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    the starting was so good, , it straight away makes your interest in the poem, , , and so was the rest of the poem, , , amazing work, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (10/31/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    Yes, the last thing we own is not gold. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    Well-penned...alpha and omega connection! (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (10/27/2013 10:45:00 PM)

    A well thought penning.... anything earthly, once it begins there will be an end.... this is a process.
    well written
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  • Sallam Yassin (10/27/2013 3:15:00 PM)

    ending last
    in words
    of heart
    in every new start
    waiting us
    next door is last
    never last for the soul in the last
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  • Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/27/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    In the womb of color black
    Was born a speck of white
    In the white dispersed we find
    All the colors of natures light.......

    Good poem and welcome to my page too.
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  • Lyn Paul (10/25/2013 11:32:00 PM)

    Particularly love the last four lines line Soul. Your words are always so caring and sensitive. I read you Poet Page these words too are incredible. Thank You and keep inspiring others (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2013 8:32:00 PM)

    Without the last word, never could last expression of thought exist in a verbal or printed context.
    For in these words of communication forms a genuine connection with all humanity.
    It importance is indeed never given it's dues.
    A beautiful poem with an expression that runs all the way through.
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  • Noreen Carden (10/23/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    Hello Soul a beautiful poem well written really lovely well done (Report) Reply

  • Hathy Tong (10/22/2013 6:18:00 AM)

    I would employ you as my personal poet or something.... I could read this poem forever! Thank you so much for sharing this poem! (Report) Reply

  • (10/21/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    Meaningful write, thought provoking! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Lacovara (10/21/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Amazing. Love the descriptive images you paint. Silence often speaks the stories of one's soul....where words fail at times. Beautiful poem....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (10/21/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    as you say its always sad to say good bye but maybe we can say hello instead of it.we can say hello to a new adventure and new period of our lives even if we are under the dark or in the silence.

    i like this poem.it s short and so meaningful.~nb
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013

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