Love Sparks Poem by Valsa George

Love Sparks

Rating: 5.0


As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted
Emotions swelled, passions surged
Like a well full to the brim
A tear drop glistened in your eyes

Cutting across the borders,
It slithered down your creamy cheek

As a freshly formed globule of dew,
Cracking into zillion rays of light,
It created a zillion wavelets of joy
And my mind danced in timeless rhythm!

Love Sparks
Sunday, September 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,love,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 21 September 2020

Well composed poem Valsa!

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Khairul Ahsan 21 September 2020

What a beautiful description of a moment when pairs of eyes emitted sparks of love through a teardrop that 'created a zillion wavelets of joy'! The graphic is beautiful too! 'And my mind danced in timeless rhythm! ' - Oh yes, it must be so! The poem gets full marks from me,5/5!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 September 2020

A well penned poem. Truly lovely and pretty....5 stars +++

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Rajnish Manga 21 September 2020

Dazzling images of love expressed through emotional vibes. This small poem enchants with its irresistible spell. Thanks.

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Varsha M 21 September 2020

Ma'am this is splendid. A drop in eye turning to zillion wavelets yet to be born quenching every emotions I lived to see it materialize under the sun that gives light. Touched the heart.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 September 2020

It created a zillion wavelets of joy And my mind danced in timeless rhythm! Wonderful love poem so beautifully penned. Loved it dear Valsa....5 Stars

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2020

How does love spark is well illustrated in this poem by you. It begins from eyes. It may be cited...As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted / Emotions swelled, passions surged Like a well full to the brim / A tear drop glistened in your eyes. Beautifully put. Graphic attached. Full to full...five stars.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2020

when come eyes to eyes hands to hands smiles to smiles breaths to breaths so near, so near...... then neither she nor me no duality there is love lives as ONE in silent peace

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 September 2020

A very lovely poem full of passion and deep emotions. It depicts a strong affection between two people and who care deeply for each other. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery. Five Stars! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 21 September 2020

...........danced in timeless rhythm............wonderful......thank u....anjandev roy.

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