As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted
Emotions swelled, passions surged
Like a well full to the brim
A tear drop glistened in your eyes
Cutting across the borders,
It slithered down your creamy cheek
As a freshly formed globule of dew,
Cracking into zillion rays of light,
It created a zillion wavelets of joy
And my mind danced in timeless rhythm!
What a beautiful description of a moment when pairs of eyes emitted sparks of love through a teardrop that 'created a zillion wavelets of joy'! The graphic is beautiful too! 'And my mind danced in timeless rhythm! ' - Oh yes, it must be so! The poem gets full marks from me,5/5!
A well penned poem. Truly lovely and pretty....5 stars +++
Dazzling images of love expressed through emotional vibes. This small poem enchants with its irresistible spell. Thanks.
Ma'am this is splendid. A drop in eye turning to zillion wavelets yet to be born quenching every emotions I lived to see it materialize under the sun that gives light. Touched the heart.
It created a zillion wavelets of joy And my mind danced in timeless rhythm! Wonderful love poem so beautifully penned. Loved it dear Valsa....5 Stars
How does love spark is well illustrated in this poem by you. It begins from eyes. It may be cited...As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted / Emotions swelled, passions surged Like a well full to the brim / A tear drop glistened in your eyes. Beautifully put. Graphic attached. Full to full...five stars.
when come eyes to eyes hands to hands smiles to smiles breaths to breaths so near, so near...... then neither she nor me no duality there is love lives as ONE in silent peace
A very lovely poem full of passion and deep emotions. It depicts a strong affection between two people and who care deeply for each other. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery. Five Stars! ! !
...........danced in timeless rhythm............wonderful......thank u....anjandev roy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well composed poem Valsa!