Nature's Lap Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Nature's Lap

Rating: 5.0


Monsoon's first raindrop
On the lips of sunflower
Dawn sun smiles softly

On your hair chignon
Dews of evaporation;
Candle greets twilight

Silence in the dark,
In the abode of moonlight
Spring river waters

I born, die, reborn
Redie in the fertile land
Flowers bloom for you

Chattogram © Mahtab Bangalee
23.06.2021

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 June 2021

So beautiful. This is in my List.

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Varsha M 23 June 2021

Tis a lovely composition well encorporated minute details to catch the true essence of happiness and life. Beautiful.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

Truly Nature's Lap, MAHTAB! Very enjoyable read and so loveliest worded.5 Stars Full for your amazing Nature's Lap

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M Asim Nehal 24 June 2021

And many times it happens on earth, born, die, reborn, again die and the cycle goes on and on.5********

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Kostas Lagos 24 June 2021

Death and rebirth, a dance of life and nature. Beautiful poem

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imagination perfectly in tune with

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2021

Another poem of great depth embellished with amazing imagery..Beautifully crafted. To my Poem List.

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Lasaad Tayeb 24 June 2021

Beautiful write with stunning imagery and great wording, deserves 5 stars

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Dear Mahtab, top marks for this cute poem

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Lovely as the tender flower, Life, death and rebirth - a cycle or circular dance of the universe

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