Understanding Beauty From Your Eyes Poem by Unwritten Soul

Understanding Beauty From Your Eyes

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Perhaps because i was born blind
Black be my forever favorite color
My trusted eyes are from you my friend
Though i don't know what beauty means
But know it is opposite to ugly
Even ugly is strange to me too
Because only darkness in my eyes

Fragrance tricked my breathe
Oh I know you hold me a rose
With the praise for its crimson
By the layers you describe the grace
I wanted to have but all I see is the same
Black, the color that i see
Because darkness is my sight
My blindness believe of your eyes
Hold it to my own hands but thorns hurt me
Is it beautiful? In pain i still trust you
Because you are my eyes
So I know..
That the rose is really beautiful

Rail of colors appeared after the raindrops
So beautiful in seven lanes you convinced
Intense red mesmerize sky ended by calm violet hue
How i wonder the amazing world by your sound if it true
But still to me all colours just the same, only black stained
Because darkness is all i see before and after the rain
Glad to know noisy storm creates beauty at the end

Oh why I am blind to see my own smile
That i wish i could see because you say it is nice
Not only me, everything is beautiful from your view
Maybe this world full of beauty that i will never can see
But i am glad, you are my eyes to see for me

If you ask, i cant even distinguish what color you wear
The only thing i sure you wearing a black one maybe
Laughing on me, you say dark is beautiful just like night
All times you forgotten to tell ugliness around me
That's why my finger bleed when rose thorn cut me buddy
And i risk myself in storm because you never say bad about it to me

When i heard voices whispering ugly about you
I dont trust my ears even i can hear perfectly
My trust on your eyes not with my blindness
With you i see true beauty not by my sight
But i sense it perfectly with my heart
Because with you beauty is everywhere
Is there ugliness you know? perhaps no
While with others they describe me ugliness
How scare i am knowing how worse world can be

I dont know colors but your heart must be crimson
Like a rose you praised or like the rainbow after storm
The beauty that i never perceived in my eyes
But beauty that i can see from heart
By a blind man like me
Do you see like me,
Do you?

People may not believe my beauty experience
Sorry because all things look same to me
More sorry, i cant explain about colors
because i am a blind man
But i have a heart
That still can see many

Wednesday, August 14, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: blind,life,understanding
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is story that crossed over to my mind, A blind man with beautiful hearted friend that be his eyes to see world that he can never see...The friend who tells nice words describing how beautiful world is, brightening the blind man vision though from many people he heard world is full of ugliness...In his blindness he found rare beauty, the beauty view from his friend's heart, and found his heart is kind of another beauty form...we rarely found when we have normal sight..for a blind man he experiences this to feel colors in his dark sight. Be friend with people that have good heart, and good hearted people dont talk bad or ugly words..and befriend with them will make you live in earthly heaven_Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

nice imagery, very imaginative and creative you send a message with a simple story, but that message so deep and beauty has its own way to blossom foe everyone cause beaty is universal nice written

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 August 2013

But I have heart who still can see many..Beautiful write..if one want to sense a beauty, eyes may not see that beauty which ones heart can see...so true..its how we see the beauty in the world.. This poem carries lot of in depth meaning.. Loved reading it...feeling pleasant....

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Dee Corpolongo 30 August 2013

A Beautiful and well observation of the heart poem. I also love the advice you give in your comment, as it also is beautifully said....and understood. Thank you for seeing the beauty of a good heart, Soul. May life only show you that vision forevermore.

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

People may not believe my beauty experience Sorry because all things look same to me More sorry, i cant explain about colors because i am a blind man But i have a heart That still can see many...wow Great Soul may all of us have such vision while giving judgement regarding beauty, though simple but too deep..well Done

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2013

Although a blind person may not be able to see beauty, neither can he see the ugliness in the world and that has to be a good thing. His seeing friend can bring him only beauty. A lovely poem Soul, and very inspired.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

People may not believe my beauty experience Sorry because all things look same to me More sorry, i cant explain about colors because i am a blind man But i have a heart That still can see many...........these lines are most impressive. I love these lines. This poem attracts me for second visit.

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Rebecca Navarre 16 January 2018

Endlessly Beautiful Soul! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Touching! ! ! ! ! Beyond Words! ! ! ! ! Beyond Numbers! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2017

A blind man feels beauty in trust of his friend's words. He believe him and his eyes. He really feels everything black as he is blind but he has an another eye through which he can see real beauty and that is heart. A kind hearted man never says ugly and feels the eternal beauty. Dear Soul, you have astutely and nicely painted this theme in this poem that touches the hearts of the readers. Beautiful poem with lofty insight!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

Favorite color! Nice piece of work.

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

a great note you have added to a lovey poem.

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