Unwritten Soul


My Apology To You Is Like My Night Sky - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Dear my farest star
When I, the sun will finally set
I hope my brightest ray be finally gone
Because there is no intention of me to hide you
When I, the sun finally lost my time
I hope the beautiful light will come from you
And you may know time makes it fair
To let me have my light on
without denying yours
Time makes it fair
As God stares

My distant companion,
If my sky blue is hurting you
For you my apology is the night sky
Be shine..Be shine there if you forgive

No special in me my farest star
Dont you know you are the own sun in your own world
I am perhaps a farest star in a distance
But I dont envy for your moment
Just be shine there be shine

My tears are the rainbow at the sunset
Because i surrender all my light to time i offer
All i need is for you shine at this sky
So my apology to you is dark night
Just if you can shine be shine

Who will be a greatest its not my bitter
My life is still breathing on
And you be bright at my night
My shine is with me
In other side
Other side

If blue sky is for me
Dark night sky is my apology
From me, a sun to you..a shiny star

Topic(s) of this poem: apology, forgiveness, friendship, life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem to tell about my sorriness that i never want to cover someone existance, talent or your bright shine...Im sorry because if it does i cant do anything but to avoid, but please know that you have to be confident yourself, its not my talent or existance that shine but its your confident to be shine, because who you are already great but without tust to self, it wont enough this space to tell who you are...be good my friend, be cool i dont want you be sad...so this apology of my existance i hope so you will always boldly shine your own

Comments about My Apology To You Is Like My Night Sky by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/24/2017 11:01:00 PM)


    My distant companion,
    If my sky blue is hurting you
    For you my apology is the night sky
    Be shine..Be shine there if you forgive.. .. great theme.
    Apology is a best quality that can vanish the agony and bitterness. Beautifully painted poem amazingly shared here..10
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  • (6/14/2017 12:47:00 AM)


    This does bring to mind....Arise fair Sun...The sincerity of any genuine apology can indeed destroy all lingering elements of bitterness, Robbed of its sting, that Envious Moon. This is a great piece, Soul. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/14/2017 1:47:00 AM)

    Shiniest thank for you dear, love is the secret recipe for a smile to awake from our bad days...lets forgiveness erase the scar, understanding bold the beauty of relationships...Your comment so beautiful, it shine so bright to me..loved it

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/3/2016 2:42:00 AM)


    Muse in fine twists n turns n soaring skyline imagination. Good work. Shows kindness n compassion of yor soul. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/10/2015 10:51:00 AM)


    Just if you can shine to touch my heart with true love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (11/29/2015 9:22:00 AM)


    Much beauty here I enjoyed it very much (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (11/28/2015 3:41:00 AM)


    Great write, Soul.
    Thought provoking. When our own light so bright, we tend to hide the light of others.
    God has created night to let the less bright ones shine too.
    I love the message inside this poem.
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  • Hazel Durham (11/24/2015 4:14:00 PM)


    To give praise to another person and to be delighted to see them shine so bright is a gift of kindness and goodness that has it's own beautiful light that shines from the heart and soul.
    A really beautiful poem about truth and friendship that shines so bright in a sometimes dark world!
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  • Bharati Nayak (11/16/2015 7:00:00 AM)


    Beautiful words, beautiful poem.Deep love and close friendship some times marred by jealousy, when one gets jealous of other's talent.In this case both are like shining stars in their own way.One will not overshadow the other.There is an earnest desire to make up.with apology and forgiveness and see the other one to shine brightest as there is deep love for the other..Thanks for sharing.I too like your words on poet page - - - - - - - - - -10 (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (11/15/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    Your words are magic and reading your notes I can see your heart. Thank you Unwritten Soul....10 (Report) Reply

  • Farzad Jahanbani (11/15/2015 1:54:00 AM)


    very nice Feeling is in your poem & this vers is beautiful: My tears are the rainbow at the sunset
    Good shiny time
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 11, 2016


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