Romeo Della Valle

Freshman - 505 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

My Fate - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

I have flown to the limitless skies
While bewitched by your bittersweet lies...
On you I placed my heart's desire and hope
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  • Meena Mustafa (7/26/2012 3:36:00 PM)

    Wow! Wow! Wow! I am speechless.... A BEAUTIFUL write. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/23/2012 5:09:00 PM)

    Heartbreak! Heartbreak! !
    This is a lovely emotion purged out in a beautiful couplets.
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  • Hans Vr (6/19/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    Very good poem. I love the very positive ending. So much wisdom in this poem. So refreshing
    Very thoughtfully written.
    Excellent
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  • Valerie Dohren (6/17/2012 4:47:00 PM)

    Great poem - we all strive to be masters of our own domain. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/17/2012 4:11:00 PM)

    Master of your domain... great tie up line to recognition that you are able to take your future and enjoy it and maybe hushing past pains under the rug...good luck in life and love... karen (Report)Reply

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  • Goddy Nana-mens (6/16/2012 9:38:00 AM)

    Good poem, Romeo. Heart-felt. (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (6/15/2012 3:22:00 PM)

    Fate draws its own line.It can be felt but cannot be observed and controlled.It can only be charged with positive energy thinking its a battery to success rendering human connection, love, job, studies etc.The properties as such it has also a limit of acceptance and this capacity maturity is measured by the age and experience.I wish the lines you have nourished what could have been a lifetime for many make your name ageless not like the melodramatic Romeo or cult alfa romeos merlon brando or mafias, de niros what most europeans coin italians as in US database.Exception was a Balboa who boxed with destiny.Life`s highway does not bother about anything.Only mobility with time.Time is a best healer of looking pictures without frame in introspection.Many of us do share not the snapshots meant to be shared in public to ease problems.We all tend to become flowers fresh from a shop just bought.This way many unknown flowers though smelling sometimes better and looking better loses the very dignity and affinity to humans to be concocted in love beyond worries but also withers away leaving an impact behind to digest.Well written and great application of poetry.Bravo! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/15/2012 4:47:00 AM)

    Amazing poetry, very expressive! Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (6/14/2012 10:18:00 PM)

    ''I offered you pure love but you played a game,
    Making me look like a picture without a frame...
    You designed that game and played it well,
    Turning my life into a living Hell...'' thought provoking stanza of a beautiful poem, i love this.
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  • Elna Nel (6/14/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    Powerful! Can relate to your words. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2012 4:57:00 PM)

    absolutely stunning.....I could feel such sad passion...thanks for your invitation to read, blessings..Deva (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2012 12:43:00 PM)

    Your poem is impeccable written.I think that there a few poets in this world being capable to express the sorrow so well as you expressed it in this love poem.I like also the rhymes.Mari. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilson (6/13/2012 1:48:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful poem, I found inspiration from, thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2012 6:56:00 PM)

    Beautiful. This poem reminds me of Invictus, I am the master of my fate; I am the captain of my soul. Stay strong Romeo! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2012 12:05:00 PM)

    and now you are a stronger you! (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (6/12/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    battered breath ruffles as when betrayed
    heart learns to know riff of cadence
    narrow path of pretension yet deludes
    as love bewilders in deep dark of wilderness, oh what a write dear Romeo! quite poignant yet painful by rune of fate, endearment suffers through lurid betrayal in game of love, yet wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

    i am quite inspired to see you here after a long time! ! !
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  • Kasia Fedyk (6/12/2012 10:48:00 AM)

    Oh my God Romeo, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, it is sublime. Yes, in Gods hands I Ieave my fate. Thank you so much Romeo and many Blessings to you Always! Thank you, Love and Light (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (6/12/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    certainly a nice flow in your poem. but i feel pain to read your poem.You are a poet. if you express like this then what other will do. I like the last line. Gone are the worries and pain,
    I am master of my own domain.... But my brother, keep writing.your fate is always good and will be always good. Best of luck. plz read my poem flames of desire. you will find peace.
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  • (6/11/2012 11:17:00 PM)

    So nice depiction of beloved's impression--Picture without frame! The positivity of the philosophy of life is strong here.Love's lost but the zeal for life acts as a driving force to go ahead.Terrific Sir! Like U may I grate 10++++++++++? (Report)Reply

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  • Simon Collins (6/11/2012 7:41:00 PM)

    Moving on in well chosen words, realizing your true worth, great poem, thank you (Report)Reply

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