Unwritten Soul

Spirit Of Fire In The Water - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Light, celebrated in the flame
The heat burning through the shine
Warm kiss of the waving touch
Comfy, lean on the surfaces

Embodied as the heat, spirit of fire
Enliven small body with desires
Changed when it feed with anger
Growing bigger, burning hearts of other
Cursed touches left to be ashes, gray color

Minutes in reigning power
Now the fire goes down
Gone, when the sky cries
Dropping the purest water
Silent the fire, suppressed the anger
Somehow when extinction of warm
Welcoming the rise of arrogant
Water empowered with freezing touch
Frozen as snow, hot turn cold

When power flaming ego in the fire,
As also arrogant freezing the water
Heat left, diffused with miracles
Till there's nothing for each other
When tolerate not in heart of lovers

Spirit of fire, burning in the sun
Kissed the land sealed with heat warm
Melt the icy heart, sent by celebrated sunlight
The snow white in the winter alive again
Liquid as freedom, ice captured the warm
Back to flow through the river it goes

A love shared between fire and water
Two bodies of untouchable
Unites into one shared kiss
Preserve the heat into modesty
Warming when it's too cold
Cooling when it's too hot

Tolerate of two bodies
water and fire in a bond of heat
Spirit of fire swim in the heart of water
Promised harmony, keep warm in the winter
Bringing cold refreshing in this summer
Ego of each in such altered flow spirit tendency
Create a world of respect and tolerate
When two show powers holding together
Seal cold to the fire, and flame fire to the ice
Burning love in frozen hearts
Living in warm ice forever after
As spirit of fire In the water

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem i wrote in the last day of July, forcing myself to write again. Picking Fire and Ice as two subjects, i used heat as the junction of both, as well as the heat here i referred it as 'Spirit of fire' and heat carry the meaning of tolerate.The first two stanzas i tried to tell the usefulness of the fire, if we able to control, but if it become to big, it will burn all, out of control (even try to burn the heat, or burning the tolerate in self flame) ..like a small matter if we create it as a big issues, it will be worst. and the big fire here growing because of ego flames in self...In third stanza i recall the power of thing has a limit since there always a thing or someone that can surpass our ability, like water kill fire....However the same thing happened if we turn to be arrogant, lost of heat, lost of tolerate then like a water it become an ice..too cold out of touch

If the water kill the fire, the fire melt the ice to be water and the water can be really warm, comfy for all...and here i wanted to show if we use each other care power and ability in proper way we shall create a nice harmony place, so i symbolized it as a love between fire and water(ice) ..if it too cold fire send more heat to warm, if it too hot, could be water and ice must absorb more heat to maintain the temperature..like in our life if both are temper persons and no one to reduce anger the fire is burning all even deeper...so one must be water or calm fire to balance the relationship, applicable for everyone. Water is a state where ice and fire meet, the melted ice (water) as the body and the warm (giving water stay in fluid) was from heat, spirit of fire..actually lot of things i wanted to add in the poem like vapor and how the vapor back calming as the rain bla bla, living without fire bla bla bla but i guess it is enough too long right hahhaah so i stop it there..hope this help you to understand this :) will coming back to the new poem later_Unwritten SoulSoul

Comments about Spirit Of Fire In The Water by Unwritten Soul

  • Simone Inez Harriman (7/13/2017 3:52:00 PM)

    I love the weaving of these two elements into the emotions and egos of people who are very different. Fire and water...much respect between these two elements. Too much fire can burn and evaporate. Too much water can drown or douse enthusiasm. A lovely write. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/6/2016 7:14:00 AM)

    In such flow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/10/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    The message of tolerance and harmony, you have put across in a very effective way! Fires of anger should be extinguished with the showers of tolerance and love! The ice of coldness and bitterness should be melted by the warmth of forgiveness and understanding! Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Sun Shine (10/31/2012 11:40:00 PM)

    awesome dear unwritten soul u have a powerful ignition to write keep it up impressive.. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (9/7/2012 3:46:00 AM)

    Dear Soul, your words have such meaning. You are a true story teller and your painting is truly amazing.Thank you (Report) Reply

  • (8/27/2012 3:58:00 PM)

    an enticing title and an enthralling journey in the read, quite mystic :) (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (8/24/2012 10:43:00 PM)

    Wow! You really have a very creative and imaginative mind! Speechless! I feel like I have been touched by and angel by reading this beautiful and thought provoking write! You are the best in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Also thank you so much for all your valuable and highly appreciated on my poems! People as beautiful as you keep inspiring me and believing in LOVE! God Bless You! (Report) Reply

  • Abdallah Gamal (8/22/2012 8:56:00 PM)

    I'm truly amazed by your far imagination, by the depth in choosing the suitable colours for that great beautiful amazing picture, you're using s pecial kind of magic that get the reader's mind out of his head, to make the heart fly freely with the beautiful imagination in your poem, my HONOURABLE friend, whatever you did, what spell you used, I wanna get back my mind :) (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (8/22/2012 8:33:00 AM)

    Yes, true, very different people can live in harmony, you showed here how two opposite things can complete each other. Very nice, thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/13/2012 7:13:00 AM)

    The parallel line drawn between the human relationship and water, fire is unique. Thanks for this novelty of thought.You have told the subject-matter of your poem neatly.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/12/2012 7:24:00 AM)

    I have nothing more to say because you have told much in poem and with its post script. So, much.......... (Report) Reply

  • Sruthi Varma (8/8/2012 9:29:00 PM)

    Its Fabulous...! ! ! Fire & Ice..i loved it.. (Report) Reply

  • Sruthi Varma (8/8/2012 9:28:00 PM)

    Its Fabulous...! ! ! Fire & Ice...I loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Sruthi Varma (8/8/2012 9:26:00 PM)

    Its Fabulous...! ! ! Fire & Ice...I luvd it...... (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (8/8/2012 5:40:00 PM)

    Liked this one! Very good imagery! waiting for another...
    (Report) Reply

  • Hamid Negah (8/5/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    Bravo, what a nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (8/4/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, Soul. Very nice expression of the duality of water and fire and their very miraculous characteristics and interplay. The deeper meaning also fantastic. Great piece of poetry.
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  • Ramesh Rai (8/4/2012 4:08:00 AM)

    brilliant idea, brilliant writing, the combination of fire and water and more over spirit of fire. le me read ur one stanza - A love shared between fire and water
    Two bodies of untouchable
    Unites into one shared kiss

    Next - Spirit of fire swim in the heart of water... very impressive. the concept itself is outstanding. ur poetic talent is outstanding.
    Preserve the heat into modesty
    Warming when it's too cold
    Cooling when it's too hot.
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  • Captain Cur (8/3/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    Very interesting and impressive write and idea of spirit of fire in the water.
    As with many of your poems you paint a vivid picture with words, as you also
    do with paint. A truly gifted writer and artist, you are Mr. Soul. I salute you!
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  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (8/2/2012 9:53:00 AM)

    wow.............wow.............i glided with the more simply in the scenic words.........the concept itself.......is outstanding.........aah........hhh....ya...........ur title is a prism out of a glass i.e., mirror of your soul! ! :)) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 3, 2012

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