Spirit Of Fire In The Water Poem by Unwritten Soul
Spirit Of Fire In The Water
Light, celebrated in the flame
The heat burning through the shine
Warm kiss of the waving touch
Comfy, lean on the surfaces
Embodied as the heat, spirit of fire
Enliven small body with desires
Changed when it feed with anger
Growing bigger, burning hearts of other
Cursed touches left to be ashes, gray color
Minutes in reigning power
Now the fire goes down
Gone, when the sky cries
Dropping the purest water
Silent the fire, suppressed the anger
Somehow when extinction of warm
Welcoming the rise of arrogant
Water empowered with freezing touch
Frozen as snow, hot turn cold
When power flaming ego in the fire,
As also arrogant freezing the water
Heat left, diffused with miracles
Till there's nothing for each other
When tolerate not in heart of lovers
Spirit of fire, burning in the sun
Kissed the land sealed with heat warm
Melt the icy heart, sent by celebrated sunlight
The snow white in the winter alive again
Liquid as freedom, ice captured the warm
Back to flow through the river it goes
A love shared between fire and water
Two bodies of untouchable
Unites into one shared kiss
Preserve the heat into modesty
Warming when it's too cold
Cooling when it's too hot
Tolerate of two bodies
water and fire in a bond of heat
Spirit of fire swim in the heart of water
Promised harmony, keep warm in the winter
Bringing cold refreshing in this summer
Ego of each in such altered flow spirit tendency
Create a world of respect and tolerate
When two show powers holding together
Seal cold to the fire, and flame fire to the ice
Burning love in frozen hearts
Living in warm ice forever after
As spirit of fire In the water
If the water kill the fire, the fire melt the ice to be water and the water can be really warm, comfy for all...and here i wanted to show if we use each other care power and ability in proper way we shall create a nice harmony place, so i symbolized it as a love between fire and water(ice) ..if it too cold fire send more heat to warm, if it too hot, could be water and ice must absorb more heat to maintain the temperature..like in our life if both are temper persons and no one to reduce anger the fire is burning all even deeper...so one must be water or calm fire to balance the relationship, applicable for everyone. Water is a state where ice and fire meet, the melted ice (water) as the body and the warm (giving water stay in fluid) was from heat, spirit of fire..actually lot of things i wanted to add in the poem like vapor and how the vapor back calming as the rain bla bla, living without fire bla bla bla but i guess it is enough too long right hahhaah so i stop it there..hope this help you to understand this :) will coming back to the new poem later_Unwritten SoulSoul
Wow! You really have a very creative and imaginative mind! Speechless! I feel like I have been touched by and angel by reading this beautiful and thought provoking write! You are the best in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Also thank you so much for all your valuable and highly appreciated on my poems! People as beautiful as you keep inspiring me and believing in LOVE! God Bless You!
Dear Soul, your words have such meaning. You are a true story teller and your painting is truly amazing.Thank you
The message of tolerance and harmony, you have put across in a very effective way! Fires of anger should be extinguished with the showers of tolerance and love! The ice of coldness and bitterness should be melted by the warmth of forgiveness and understanding! Great write!
This is one of your finest, Soul. It reminds me of Robert Frost's Fir and Ice. Both have a certain passion. Both can be a road to destruction....and the eradication of passion. One seemingly cannot exist without the other. You've provided so much content for profound thought, Soul.
The weaving of tolerance and harmony, heat and coldness is so enchanting and fantastic. It is a beautiful metaphor related to body, mind and spirit. It is a didactic poem from where we learn to be cool from wrath. An excellent work.10.This poem goes to my poems list.
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I love the weaving of these two elements into the emotions and egos of people who are very different. Fire and water...much respect between these two elements. Too much fire can burn and evaporate. Too much water can drown or douse enthusiasm. A lovely write.
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4/26/2024 12:18:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Yes, true, very different people can live in harmony, you showed here how two opposite things can complete each other. Very nice, thank you for share.