Sweet Sour Apple Bites Poem by Unwritten Soul

Sweet Sour Apple Bites

Rating: 4.3


Orchard of apple and variety
Here you come, the apples lover
Come sing and praise like always
'Shining around the skin
Your colour is my favorite apple
The fresh one
So is your taste'

I am the apple to smile and sing
'If i am a green
A sweet sour love
Bite one, bite two
Bite still
Taste me my apples lover
Taste my sweet sour love
I'm green and sour
Pluck me bite me my lover'

The hunter replied
Bite one and some
Tasted your sour love
Bite still because i loved
Because i am the apple lover'

Apples smile continue the song
'If i am a red apple
Sweet and moist
Bite one, then two
Bite more
Taste my sweet life
Red as my love, taste me nice
Bite one bite some
Taste me sweet you will like it'

'Green or Red
Bite sweet or bite sour
I must love you my apples
simply because...
I am the true apple lover'
Explained hunter

Sweet red or sour green
Sugar rich energy will reach your heart sooner
Running in your blood and pump the beat so dear
'O apples my dear i grow you in orchard to be with me so near'
Confessed by gardener, before apple answered
'You work hard and love so sincere, will fruit you love every year'

Bite one, sweet or sour everyday
Promise keeps you away from doctor
Bite one Bite some Bite all say the lover
Energy, Protect you always said apple

If you love something, make it further
This is what apple and hunter tell you, No Fears

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Credit to Ahmed Khaled to point some issues of apples
so what i can say here it was inspired by Ahmed Khaled and fair to say this is our collaboration. Took of the chance to dedicate this poem for Steve, Co founder of Apple...All his courage to chase his dream is what i really called as an apple lover...

Meaning of this poem,
I want to talk about 'Do what you want' choose what you like
It's not all about apples, it is about...if you have a dream (your future)
make it real either you taste it difficult or easy you will always enjoyed it
just like i tell you in the story, green or red, sweet or sour
the apple hunter/gardener still like it, why simple cause the hunter like it
..As you know what you like and nod for the challenge, you will
get satisfied with what are you having, doing...it's your favorite choice
..Include the words 'An apple a day keeps doctor away' hoping you
understand, you will safe and satisfy if you choose the path you like
and you will safe from regret..Chase your dream :) _Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 31 October 2011

A very good poem on apples directly but indirectly it applies to humans. Just like apples have different colors and tastes we human beings look different physically and our attitude and behavior varies greatly. These lines are lyrical in style...... 'If i am green A sweet sour love Bite one, bite two Bite still Taste me my apples lover...... While I'm am reading from onside, from other side mind went back to SAROJINI Naidu's poem 'Bangle Sellers'. I take pleasure in reading this poem. Let me doff the poet for her skillful artistic and noble work........

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Rekha Mandagere 10 October 2011

Different shades of life is cotrasted with the red and green shades of apple which is vital for life.You made life beautiful comparing it to tasty apple, sour or sweet, life is beautiful! But i like red sweet apple more than the green shade. You give me only that from your garden :) Nice write, fantastic imagery. Marks 10+

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I took time to read this and repeatedly grasped every word, am wowed, especially the beggining lines,

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 October 2011

a real apple lover will love the apple whether it be red or green like in love, a lover will accept and love a person in all her sweetness and sourness, in all her best and her least that is how i see this poem and yes, it makes sense.

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Hosny Soliman 03 October 2011

Dear Soul, i read it all even what credit to Hamed Khaled.For sure i will be back to read Khaled's poetry later. Now i will tell you what came to my mind before i read your short point of view about what you wrote.At the same time i think that every good poem can give every one what and how he can see and feel it. For that i think that piece of poetry is really good that it gave me different meaning than both of you and Khaled too. To start with 'Orchard of apple and variety'it means that there many other fruits.Also the words 'apple's lover and hunter'.The word apple must take me to Adam&Eve and the apple.The word hunter can mean some one looking after or search about something.Also hunt can mean repellent or chas after something with bad intentiont.I think with apple we must say pick an apple, to hunt it mean forcibly. Back to the orchard from your point of veiw it an orchard for apple and fruits.But for me i think it was an orchard of women also with variety.LOL May be i have a dirty imagination but as you know i'm a painter like the beauty every where specially the women beauity.Also your words'Pluck, taste, pite'takes my imagination to that way. Dear soul i can be wrong but all i can say that really a good poetry i enjoyed it very much.Thanks for every thing. Yes i want to add that your idea about go through sweet and sour experiences in our life by this way it really great.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2018

'Green or Red Bite sweet or bite sour I must love you my apples simply because... I am the true apple lover' Explained hunter.....haunting expression with an broad outlook. Whether red or green, sweet or sour a true apple lover tastes it, so also a person with divine power feels the same as to hurdle or ecstacy. He faces difficulty and enjoys ease. A great philosophical poem shared startlingly. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

well, even though i was living not too far from where steve was dying, i never considered this poem to have anything to do with computers. i was thinking apples, the fruit, and sex/romance. i guess i'm just an american guy! ! ! thanks for sharing. as for an apple a day................... i have a little poem about that for you other folk who, like me, thought this would have to do with apples, especially if you like (what i hope is a little) humor. :) 27 An Apple A Day....... [Apples; Health; Stupid Guy; Humor? ; Pretty Short] online 8/17/2013

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Ruby Honeytip 30 December 2012

Live safe from regret.....beautiful: -) I like red apples btw.....but I'm a Samsung girl lol. Great poem...great message 10/10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 November 2011

I enjoy an apple now and again? ? ? ?

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Sonali Sings 13 November 2011

I see your poem from slight different perspective... As a fruit is dear to a gardener so are all kids to their parents... no matter how much pain they give while upbringing, what results they may give in future, they are all beloved to their caregivers... Brilliant work! ! !

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