Swimming The Past Time Poem by Unwritten Soul

Swimming The Past Time

Rating: 4.4


Disappear between the space of dust
In a smoke, within the light
Time moves in any speed
Continuously without tired no rest
In a chime of turbulence
Swimming back to the past
For the broad river back to early creek
Unfold the memories of past ages
In the album of experience, our old life
Reversing tears back to enter the eyes
Revisiting old smiles back on lips one more time
Wandering all before just before now
Still, we moving forward heading toward the future
Toward the estuary, swimming follow the flowing time
Moving back or in front, physical still here
Wandering, facing the stream only our mind
All good, bad now a past scenery along the time river
We heading to estuary to be as a part of wise ocean
Till time sending our final destiny to the sea
Another scenery of cry or happy we will feel and see
Just to move forward, forgive, learn to gain from past
Nothing to waste because time moves in any speed
So i will let my tears flow and smiles glow
Live these beautiful feelings in my life
For all time, as i know
Soon we will have no more
to hold each other (time and life)

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Having a break from 'Rise from Ashes' theme
and trying write something like 'Swimming the past time'
A poem that i done as i felt how fast time disappear...
just wrote it and post it

Life walking within time, and time never stop walking
and moves in any speed..so just bring your life some cheers
in everyday even it's hard...or not _Unwritten Soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmed Khaled 09 January 2012

i'll never bear in mind concerning expecting being accused of any certain sort of exaggeration if i do have the most daring to say with full mouth, so complete heart and advanced perfect mind that the poet unwritten soul is somewhat in someway in somehow the best human example to be chosen to be the one who deserves to be or deserves to be considered a beautiful sort of angel being. PH.D: : : AHMED KHALED

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Sonali Sings 09 January 2012

Reflecting the past to relive those moments in time whether good or bad and a realization that whatever happens adds to an experience from which one must learn and move ahead into future which still holds promises while living the present moment fully. Nice poem, Soul.

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(De Va) 09 January 2012

As your soul flies into the estuary of the stars above, you see the past that never goes away, no matter how sad, but. you also see the memories of the times you would never want to be without....I see your soul so hot in the night sky, flying to find that which has gone before and yet will go again....blessings

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Rekha Mandagere 11 January 2012

In the album of experience, our life is let us see and enjoy every experience of life good or bad opening every snap of an album. Let us get inspiration to swim heroically by looking at the good one's as friends and forgiving the bad one's. The poem is deeply didactic in its appeal but it is always heart touching :) lots of blessings for writing such a nice thing for the mankind. I must give 10++

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Elena Sandu 19 January 2012

How I love this poem! Let me send you my soul with a million thanks, I feel your words deep, crumbs of happiness coming from my heart too, thank you! !

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Mj Lemon 01 April 2018

Soul, times moves forward. We may do so, but we do stop. Perhaps our pause and eventual stillness amounts to the realization that we can accompany time, but not through all the ages. A profound work, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2017

Swimming in the past time is really interesting. It brings sweet and sour, happiness and sadness, gladness and lamentation, smiles and tears. Life walks in time but time doesn't stop walking. So we should move with time and gather some cheers. A beautiful poem it is, you, dear Soul, have presented here nicely and touchingly. Thanks a lot.

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Rebecca Navarre 17 August 2017

Oh God What A Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Our Ascending Time Unknown. To Quickly It's Flown... Hold All Of Life, So Precious! ! ! ! ! Both In Light And, Dark Wisdom, Beauty's Shown! ! ! ! Ever So Very Very, Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++++WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! So Very Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! saved

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Simone Inez Harriman 16 November 2015

A poignant journey that meanders around the heart.. beautiful......10

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Kasia Fedyk 03 June 2012

Brilliant and so true, the magic of remembrance the traveling soul on its next journey to touch oneness once more and dwell there. Beautiful. I love the way your words just flow so gently and so perfectly creating this masterpiece coming straight from the living spirit. Love and Light.

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