Swimming The Past Time Poem by Unwritten Soul

You have traveled far leaving this this monotonous world so you entered in to a fairyland and thoughts grow farther than the branches big Bunyan tree and you journeyed back to the past, a flashy flashing technique if one can see.......... Continuously without tired no rest In a chime of turbulence Awesome! for writing this poem to the poet I give, Indian Jasmine! :) :) :) :)

Very touching and emotional poem......keep it up...i love it..kudos

*********** [time is parallel to life, both are keep going but at a point they do intersect where we'll lose both] ************* Enjoy! as long as we've both...... 'tis a great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

*********** [time is parallel to life, both are keep going but at a point they do intersect where we'll lose both] ************* Enjoy! as long as we've both...... 'tis a great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

As the poet explain that time never stop walking and life walking within time...time is greater than everything....end of time or beginning of time is beyond man's capability...we all walk within time...and time gives us both bad or good experience, even bad experience of the past may give us nice feeling or nice remembering or today's happy moment will be past tomorrow......the theme is excellent i like the poem.full marks to the poet.

Soul, times moves forward. We may do so, but we do stop. Perhaps our pause and eventual stillness amounts to the realization that we can accompany time, but not through all the ages. A profound work, Soul.

Swimming in the past time is really interesting. It brings sweet and sour, happiness and sadness, gladness and lamentation, smiles and tears. Life walks in time but time doesn't stop walking. So we should move with time and gather some cheers. A beautiful poem it is, you, dear Soul, have presented here nicely and touchingly. Thanks a lot.

Oh God What A Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Our Ascending Time Unknown. To Quickly It's Flown... Hold All Of Life, So Precious! ! ! ! ! Both In Light And, Dark Wisdom, Beauty's Shown! ! ! ! Ever So Very Very, Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++++WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! So Very Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! saved

A poignant journey that meanders around the heart.. beautiful......10

Brilliant and so true, the magic of remembrance the traveling soul on its next journey to touch oneness once more and dwell there. Beautiful. I love the way your words just flow so gently and so perfectly creating this masterpiece coming straight from the living spirit. Love and Light.