Unwritten Soul


Tears Reflection - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Tears reflection

Moving sand, on them, I stand
Deserted In driest self esteem
Shadow of mine questioned me repeatedly
To whom my soul chained to
My soul, am i departed from you?

Silence abduct the sound
As if the flowing air ceased
Till the pain to be clearly heard
Loud in mind louder in heart
Whispering sharp, bleed me hard

On this finest sand, i still stand
When all energy now left broken
By the burning sun in front
So another step has frozen
Burned strength with aches pain

Illuminated rays, behind these eyes
Pigmented my vision for years
But as for now, fears deserted mind
Images seems blur, make pain so real
Dark as red rose to be lachrymose
Bleeding emotion wash out all sights
Dissolves my colorful thoughts
Be in the drops by my eyes pressure
Free fall touching my dry heels
Rainy tears soon wet my toes
And drained my sober continuously
Soaked me in the tears sea

Front of these eyes
All white, faded sight
No Images, left, up or right
The only one is below,
There's someone
The one that once was mine
Self reflection in another side

Dive into you, i will lost to
Drowning in you, I want back to
Stain my sight of past chromatic vision
Swimming with images back to mind
In a long trail of sleeping
Revived dream draw lines
Lead my soul find home
The lost has returned
Again...

Morning light wake me up
Soft on green grasses, I stand again
Eyes wide open with returned vision
Watching real after lost in illusion
Chaining soul and sanity
Back to me


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It's about finding self strength again, we never see the real images even if it just in front of us, because we blinded with the pain..till we find ourself again and begin to see real thing.. In this poem, I imagine the vision(mind and what we see around) blinded by the pain, it dissolved in tears and it carries emotion too...Vision and emotion are home for soul, without them, it seems to be lost, as then the tears flow it all away from eyes...the person became blind to see, and pain is taking over the body...the sea of tears then having all colors formed a self reflection of a person, could be a soul torn away from the body, then as the body return to the soul, drowning and be united again as whole...sober seal every things sight and vision...and it's like wake up from deep sleep we now open the eyes and return to new days with real color and spirit...

Being low for some reason and I lost in pain lately and it inspired me to heal myself again, rebuild in poetry and bring in imagination i tried share how i heal myself again...we should never lost part of us, we may weak by others but we may strong by self..always_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Tears Reflection by Unwritten Soul

  • Farah Ilyas (5/25/2013 12:07:00 PM)


    So glad to read that u have recovered yourself after tolerating too much phase of time...sometimes we fail to recognize the original one but nothing remains longer, one day it will be over one way or another, time elucidates everything...brilliant poem Soul....10/10: -) (Report) Reply

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  • Kelvin Owusu (12/3/2012 7:14:00 PM)


    an amazing piece of poetry that's all i can say (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2012 4:52:00 AM)


    Tears reflection is cast in the mist of the mirror mind which must transcend the impaling of the torturous now into possibilities of new beginnings new love new life the birth of new happiness when we tear through the dead skin of a past life we must outgrow into the newborn body of souls which must embrace the illumination of each days new light. (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2012 5:01:00 AM)


    I'm so glad you recovered from this ordeal. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/10/2012 3:01:00 AM)


    i just have no word to say to you soul....that is something really amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (6/29/2012 9:11:00 AM)


    You know what there are times in our lives where we are so much in pain, that no one can ease it... but are own words can.... it really shows how strongly we can get up if we decide to... Wonderful Soul, amazing in fact! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (6/23/2012 4:34:00 AM)


    too back to post comment. lovely, beautiful but i can not explain like you but I do realise.Rainy tears soon wet my toes And drained my sober continuously Soaked me in the tears sea. Grand application of words in this poem.ten to the power 10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2012 11:35:00 AM)


    a lovely write dear a perfect ten (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2012 9:09:00 AM)


    Mind often forgets to recognise the great things which are right in front of them but wanders in aimless past.it is a great flaw of human kind. How beautifully this soul is presenting in his grand style.I really love the depth and the sentiments behind this great write. A 10 is enough? Tell me soon :) (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (6/19/2012 10:00:00 AM)


    Dear Soul,
    This is a wonderful poem with a great wisdom inside.
    Sad to hear that you were in pain but so proud to see how you rediscovered self and soul.
    I agree that sometimes sadnesses come our way, they can be overwhelming for a while, feel like desert but soon a small oasis appears and like a firefly in the dark of the night, a small oasis in the desert is sometimes enough to lift us out of the gloom, no matter how dark or dry it still is around us.
    Excellent poem. I hope many many people in this world who feel lost read this. It is very inspiring and uplifting.
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  • Farah Ilyas (6/13/2012 1:43:00 PM)


    Front of these eyes
    All white, faded sight
    No Images, left, up or right
    The only one is below,
    There's someone
    The one that once was mine
    Self reflection in another side
    i like these lines very much, your poem is rich in vivid imagery, philosophy, ideas & emotions, well done indeed a heart touching poem
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  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/12/2012 10:07:00 PM)


    Morning light wake me up
    Soft on green grasses, I stand again
    Eyes wide open with returned vision
    Watching real after lost in illusion
    Chaining soul and sanity
    Back to me
    to struggle in serenity
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/11/2012 2:16:00 AM)


    Soul, it's astounding this poem of yours is completely variant other poems. It is more philosophical carrying hidden meaning in it. It caught my eye and mind. It reflects your inner ideas and strong message that people around us will try to break our confidence by different traps using some kind of baits, which call rattrap pedlar's philosophy.

    But as for now, fears deserted mind
    Images seems blur, make pain so real

    Apart from philosophy I can see music and rhythm unlike your other poems which is a welcome as it fascinates a reader to read to again again.................... Hats off to you friend!
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  • Sharad Juneja (6/10/2012 10:26:00 AM)


    Soul it's amazing.............. I have written a similar one on similar lines 3 yrs back...will place it soon....urs is subtle beautifull.. every word is a gem i loved every word of it :) (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/6/2012 7:00:00 PM)


    Sand does feel like it is moving when we stand on it by the sea.
    Perfect intro for the moving vastness of pain, soul and self sorrow
    and then ultimate rediscovery of purpose and life in this poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/4/2012 7:34:00 AM)


    Brilliantly written poem, very insightful expressing a journey away from self reality and back again. (Report) Reply

  • (6/3/2012 1:26:00 PM)


    Brilliant poem........ Very enthusiastic and meaningful i liked it so much especially it is plenty of imagination

    On this finest sand, i still stand When all energy now left broken By the burning sun in front So another step has frozen Burned strength with aches pain
    Illuminated rays, behind these eyes Pigmented my vision for years But as for now, fears deserted mind Images seems blur, make pain so real Dark as red rose to be lachrymose Bleeding emotion wash out all sights Dissolves my colorful thoughts Be in the drops by my eyes pressure Free fall touching my dry heels Rainy tears soon wet my toes And drained my sober continuously Soaked me in the tears sea

    Very beautiful poem i love it keep the good work i'm awaiting your next poem (forgot the name) keep the good work up........ Guess Who Wrote This Comment
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  • Kasia Fedyk (6/3/2012 11:47:00 AM)


    Thank you so much! Your poem is Divine beautiful, it flows from the depth of the soul experiencing pain and allowing it to be accepted and embraced and slowly healed with the majestic power of words and the Divine Hand upon it. Beautiful and so inspiring. Love and Light. Blessings! (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (6/2/2012 4:17:00 PM)


    Brilliant! Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I feel it like a gate, my soul enter and travels with each read in a different way. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • (5/30/2012 2:06:00 AM)


    This is a masterpiece my friend, profound message and very insightful poem.keep inspiring us man...

    Siya_! !
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 29, 2012



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