Under This Bluest Sky Poem by Unwritten Soul

none can come into or out of life with one's own will. boundaries or limits or cages are foundation of life. how some inorganic matter is bounded in the magic of life. very very beautiful poem friend. and we are free to choose the limits of humanity or not.

People appear to have many freedoms and limitations often coinciding within cultural, spiritual, and physical practices within their region. Birds and humans with folded wings behind bars or those suffering from cruelly imposed restrictions is such a sad situation especially when wings and minds are born to truly to fly.

Thought provoking indeed. A birds life is to just feed and flight. Life for a human is of course feed but seek ambition and materials. Humans become so ambitious they forget to simply enjoy the flight of life. With your poet notes......Without these rules there would be no respect for others. Thank you Soul

Soul, I had to read and reread several times. There is something about the last line in the first stanza. It suggests that our real freedom lies in our ability to make discovery. Perhaps taking that away represents our cage? A very fine poem, Soul

Blue sky mesmerizes us due to amazing imagery. Birds are automatically attracted and they feel freedom. This horizontal land along the sea is another boundary and very freely birds fly here. Under this blue sky beyond imagination living in freedom is a greater aspect in life. This poem is definitely very brilliantly penned. This is excellently worthy poem.

We are, as though, inhabitants of a spherical cage where we ought to abide by some rules and regulations. Although a cage of sorts, we do not usually notice the bars because the cage is a huge one. We enjoy our relative freedom as set forth by the rulers of our respective countries. Birds do not have Governments, in that sense they enjoy more freedom than we do. These thoughts occurred to my mind as I was reading your poem.

I totally share you r views and agree with them, your wisdom here is shining brightly and brilliantly. This world may be likened to a cage but Gid's rules and bounds are best for us. And I like writing poems a lot about not caging birds so I enjoyed your last two lines literally too. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, dark skinned vs fair skin, I would love to hear your views

I love this poem, Soul. I love the comments. So many people are set out to control us and encage our soul. Let us Love our Creator in a way, so special and unique, that not another person can control.

Thank you, Dear Soul. We all must be thankful to our stars for the freedom showered upon us but the same will be meaningless if we try to deprive others (humans or all living beings) of their legitimate right to freedom. A thought provoking poem. Also thanks for the Notes.

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